Friday, February 9, 2007

chapter 1

Chapter 1: Destiny begin
Monday morning
Magnus: Oh no!! Going to late for school. Mum I will skip my breakfast if not I will be catch by discipline master.

Magnus’ Mum: Are you sure? If you didn’t eat breakfast, you will have no strength to concentrate on your study…

Magnus: Never mind, it’s ok. There’s nothing to concentrate in school anyway. I have finished the studying entire subject that is needed for O level.

Magnus’ Mum: Don’t forget to close the door.

Magnus: OK!!
Running on the street…….
School bell rang….Ding Dong Ding Dong

Magnus: Crap! Now I have only one way to survive…

Magnus is cursing his discipline master...
Magnus: Please god please let my discipline master met an accident or his pet dog die and apply for leave for today!!!! PLEASE!!!!
Discipline master: OIIIII!!!!!!!!! What’s with that cursing…? Curse me is alright BUT NOT MY CUTTIE LITTLE PET DOG.
Discipline master is thinking about his cute little pet dog...

Discipline master: Back to the original matter, I know its alright for you to miss lesson, but school rule is the thing that you must obey….
Discipline master continue nagging...

Magnus mumbling: How can I not be late, Apprentice always ends late (Apprentice is a television show). If you could ask the mediacrop…

Discipline master: HEY!!!! ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME!!!
Principle walks towards Magnus and Discipline master.

Principle: STOP!!! Discipline master, I have a matter to discuss with you.

Discipline master: Ok. Magnus I will deal with you later.

Magnus was jumping for joy while he is walking back to his classroom.

Magnus: Yay I manage to run away from the demon once again. The hero will never LOSE!!! HAHAHAHA!!!

Discipline master was angrily stare at Magnus before enter principle office.
Discipline master: OI! I heard THAT!!!

Magnus stun for a few second and quickly ran off to class.

11.59am, 1 min to lunch break.

TCS: Alright, 1 more bloody minute.
Magnus, Justin, TTL: YEAH!!!
The 4 of them were power up with fire….
5 minutes later.

TTL: Why the time hasn’t arrive yet…
Tracy: It’s already 12.04. And the clock has run out of battery. LOL

Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: OMG, we have missed the crucial moment.

When they reach the canteen.

Magnus: OH NOOO!!! Fried chicken from the Malay store has sold out…

The 4 of them looks like their spirit had sucked away…

Discipline master: Oi, the four of you don’t be sad. Come to my office. I have something to give you…

Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin thinking that the discipline master will give them the most popular, tastiest FRIED FISH…

When entering the office…

Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: What is this?! Sight. Full of disappointment.

Discipline master: This is the entrance card for tomorrow guild event…


Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: GUILD EVENT!!!!?????

Discipline master: YES! The guild event which held every 5 years. Let me explain…. A guild is a place for student who possesses the power of the element to join. In this guild event, the president of each guild will choose students to their guild in this event. The guild event also gathers the entire 10 guilds together and competes with each other with the student that they have chosen during the event and train them within the time limit. Normally 10 days. So to see the difference in their training method. Also, there are over 1000 schools of age 13 years old student will be attending this event too…

Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: hmm I thought this event only for the express student and why us?

Discipline master: Although this is for the express student but the four of you, I highly recommended the four of you to attend this event…

Next day, the guild event at the national stadium…

TTL: To sweep the FLOOR!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Discipline master: Yes finally have my revenge… yahooooo
The discipline master was jumping for joy.

3 hour later.

Announcer: Let’s begin the prestigious event which held every 5 years. Oh, the first guild has arrived… Let’s see which guild is it….
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin were betting on which guild will arrive first.

Magnus: AluMillieum
TCS: BriMillieum
TTL: CaseoMillieum
Justin: Hope none of these 3. (Cause Justin was the banker)

Praying……


Announcer: Oh the first guild that arrives is…..


Pray ten times harder….
Magnus: AluMillieum AluMillieum AluMillieum AluMillieum
TCS: BriMillieum BriMillieum BriMillieum BriMillieum
TTL: CaseoMillieum CaseoMillieum CaseoMillieum CaseoMillieum
Justin: None of those 3 PLEASE!!!!

Announcer: PlikaMillieum…

Justin: YESSSSSS, I won. 1 week of Macdonals yahoooo…

PlikaMillieum president walked passes the 4 of them, and stare at them for a moment and walked away…

The four of them were scared as the president of the PlikaMillieum is one of the vicious president that you never wanted to see.


What will the president thinking, will the president spilt out to their discipline master that they are gambling…


Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: Better NOT!!!

See the next chapter on the Element Destiny. The gathering of the 10 guilds

chapter 2

Chapter 2: The gathering of the 10 guilds

The other 9 guild are entering the stadium orderly ZanMillieum, AlusMillieum, BriMillieum, CaseoMillieum, FretMillieum, KaliMeiilieum, NelimosMillieum, VlikaMillieum and SertagMillieum

Magnus thinking: AlusMillieum is cool… I can see that many other students are aiming for ZanMillieum.

TTL: Magnus what you thinking? Thinking of entering a guild. Not a chance.
Firstly, we are not express student and…..

Justin: Hang on! According to the event, Those student who attend this event may have a chance to be selected by the left and right assistant of each guild.
TCS: But why? I am still confuse, as the principle as announce that only express student can enter this kind of event.

Principle: That’s because you guys are talented…

Magnus, TTL, TCS, Justin: TALENTED???? WE?? HAHAHA

Principle: Ya. I AM SERIOUS.

The four of them were shocked.

Principle: I have seen your record and your exam paper. You guys did badly is because… YOU GUYS ARE LAZY TO FINISH THE EXAM PAPER.
You all only write until where you think, no is confirm that you will get a mere 50 marks. So I recommend your discipline master to let the four of you enter the event.

Magnus: if we are chosen to enter this event for the selection, then WHY THE HELL DID THE DISCIPLINE MASTER MADE US SWEEP THE FLOOR!!!!!

Principle: Hmm for that case, you will have to ask the discipline master yourself. But please get to your seat first according to the number on the entrance card.

The four of them are finding their seats.
Magnus: seat number 890101
TCS: seat number 890102
TTL: seat number 890103
Justin: seat number 890104

On the meantime,

President from BriMillieum: Long time no see, Alusian (president from AlusMillieum) heard that you are not really interested in this kind of event..

President from AlusMillieum: This kind of event doesn’t bring any talented student.

President from FretMillieum walk towards the 2 president.
President from FretMillieum: Nono, There are quite a lot of talented student this time. Unlike the previous guild event, none of us get a decent amount of recruits. I am also quite sure this guild event would be fun too.

President from PlikaMillieum: Off course. This time I will become the top guild rather than third. That old guy (President from ZanMillieum) and you Fretsoe will be defeated by me. (Evil smile)

President from FretMillieum: woot not friendly I guess, hope to get a nice fight from you.

President from AlusMillieum was looking around, he sense one strong element but he couldn’t find where it appear from and from which guy.

President from SertagMillieum: Hey Alusian, This time aren’t you chicken out again, giving up like this isn’t a great man would do… hahahaha

President from AlusMillieum: Excuse me, I need to go to the washroom.

President from SertagMillieum: His attitude again… sighs

President from AlusMillieum followed by his left and right assistant, walked pass Magnus and his gang where they are find their seats. He suddenly stopped. He sense an element came out from Magnus.

President from AlusMillieum: Hey, that guy over there. Whats your name?

Magnus: Me?

President from AlusMillieum: Ya, You.

Magnus: Magnus

President from AlusMillieum: What a weird name. See you later…

Justin: Wow, AlusMillieum president talk to you man.

TTL: There’s our seat.

TCS: WTH!!! Last 4 seats….

Magnus: We are being ill treated. OH NO
Announcer: Ladies and gentlemen, let us start on the selection by the 10 guild assistant.

The guild assistants quickly do their first elimination on those who possess the element power.

After the assistants finish selecting the student…

Announcer: Ok! Those who have a sticker on their shoulder please come forward.

Justin: Woot I have yay I have been selected.

TTL, TCS: Me too. Magnus what about you?

Magnus: I have been eliminated. I didn’t not possess the element power. SO good luck to you guys…

Even though Magnus seems to be happy on the surface but he was crying like hell in his heart.

All the selected students are going onto the stage.

President from NelimosMillieum: Wow, Nice number 360 student have possess the element power. But I think some of them only possess the container for the element power.

Container for the element power means People who are able to have an element power but need a certain period of time like, a month, a year or a lifetime to get it.

President from NelimosMillieum: This is getting more exciting.

Left assistant from NelimosMillieum: Sir, I have detected a strange element power.

President from NelimosMillieum: WHERE!!! Which guy has it?

Left assistant from NelimosMillieum: Sorry sir, I was unable to know who possess it.

President from NelimosMillieum: You fool! Search for it right now…
President from AlusMillieum: There’s no need for a search, That guy, I have recruit him.

President from NelimosMillieum: Oh, Alusian. Didn’t you forget the rule, we have to select the student at the same time.

President from AlusMillieum: Ya I know. But it applies to those who are on the stage right now.

President from NelimosMillieum: Oh I see, so I have no choice but to let you have it. By the way where is that boy that you have recruited?

President from AlusMillieum: Magnus!! Come here right now!

Magnus was shocked and didn’t know what had happen, but to rush over to the president from AlusMillieum.

President from AlusMillieum: This is the guy that I recruited.

President from NelimosMillieum: So is you. When did you find him?

President from AlusMillieum: I am not obligated to let you know. Sorry if you would excuse me, I need to have a word with this boy.

President from NelimosMillieum: Damm Alusian, You are cunning ones.

Alusian bring Magnus outside the stadium.

President from AlusMillieum: Magnus, I have officially recruited you to my guild.


Magnus: WHAT!!!!!

President from AlusMillieum: I do not want to repeat myself again…

Magnus: YESH!!! Yahoooooooooooooooooo. AlusMillieum Guild wahoooo

On the way back to stadium.

Magnus: But I have a question President Alusian.

President from AlusMillieum: yes?

Magnus: Why did you recruit me, I didn’t even posses an element power right?

President from AlusMillieum: No, You have. But it’s not just am ordinary element at your age would possess.

Magnus: What does that mean?

President from AlusMillieum: You possess an ADVANCE ELEMENT!!!

What kind of element can Magnus possess, that make Alusian wanting to recruit Magnus so eagerly and why didn’t Magnus being selected in the first selection round? Find out on the next chapter: Chapter 3: Begin with the Ten days training!

Bio about the story

Element Destiny

Introducing character bio

Main character: Magnus
Age: 13
Race: Chinese
First element achieve: Tian (天) Advance element
Guild: AluMillieum
School: zakura secondary (N(a))
Interest: Play counter-strike, watch television and play chess
About him: He only do what is right for him, Curious about things that he never seen. But he still can’t activate his element power

Classmates: TCS
Age: 13
Race: Chinese (but don’t understand Chinese)
First element achieve: Huo(火)Basic element
Guild: FretMillieum
School: zakura secondary (N(a))
Interest: Betting and play ps2

Number of guild: 10
Dark society: unable to determine…

Fusion technique
Summoning element
Advance element: Tian, Gold, Ground(Di), Demon, Steel
Basic element: Fire, water, Earth(Tu), Lightning and wind

Name of the guild: ZanMillieum, AlusMillieum, BriMillieum, CaseoMillieum, PlikaMillieum, FretMillieum, KaliMeiilieum, NelimosMillieum, VlikaMillieum, SertagMillieum

Current Top 3 guild: ZanMillieum, FretMillieum and PlikaMillieum


Ranking in each guild:
President (who holds the ultimate control in each guild. He/She must obtain 2 summoning creatures and able to fuse them into their soul)

Right assistant and left assistant (support the president in his/her work. Being chief commander with outstanding result and the recommendation of president)

Chief Commander X 10 (spilt into 2 group helping the right and left assistant. Obtain 5 basic element and 3 advance element and able to use summoning creature. Must be recommended by President)

Vice chief Commander (assist the chief commander. Obtain 5 basic element and 3 advance element. Must be recommended by right or left assistant)

Support type, Guard of the guild X 20-30 (Guarding and supporting the guild, act as front line during wartime. Obtain 5 element or 2 advance elements)

1st rate warrior (Top notch warrior, have obtain 3 element and 10 years of fighting experience and passing the 1st rate warrior test or 1 advance element with 2 years of fighting experience)

2nd rate warrior (have obtain 3 element and 10 years of fighting experience and passing the 2nd rate warrior test or 1 advance element and 1 year experience)

3rd rate warrior (obtain 2 element and 5 years of fighting experience or 1 advance element)

1st rate fighter (having 2 element and 2 years of experience)

2nd rate fighter (having 1 element)

3rd rate fighter (having 1 element)

Basic guard (having 1 element but can’t be activated due to insufficient amount of element power)

Purpose of the existing of the guild:
1) Protect the Destiny stone that each guild had been assign with
2) Make sure that people with element won’t go against the justice
3) Gather many possible talent to fight against the dark society
4) Protect the civilians with their own element power.
I am now currently thinking of doing a manga for myself, using my thoughts and imagination , i have come up with a story.