Wednesday, February 14, 2007
about chap 7
This chap show some skill that Magnus possess and the Morgen society member. Finally a fighting chapter. Its really tough to write a fighting scene without the aid of picture. Hope you guys can picturise the scene...
Chapter 7
Chapter 7: The battle begin…
Old Sage: Can Magnus win the dark society member… He doesn’t have any fighting experience.
Morgen Society member (1): Hey old fool, try to take care of yourself first before concerning that brat.
Old Sage: Do you really think that I will lose to you. Don’t ever underestimate the Sage.
Meanwhile… Magnus was facing his first battle with one of the Morgen Society member.
Morgen Society member (2) draw out his saber, together with his element demon. He made a direct attack on Magnus. The Morgen society member speed was too fast that Magnus was unable to react. And a slash was given to Magnus left arm.
Magnus: His speed was too fast.
Morgen Society member (2): DIE YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!!
Golden Crush!!! Golden spiked edge pop up from the ground and injured Morgen Society member (2) right leg. A shark creature takes Magnus to a safe place.
Magnus: Who are you?? Are you here to capture me?
Shark: Don’t worry you are safe now, my master will settle everything.
Chief Commander (3) Crusine: Now your opponent is ME, Crusine.
Morgen Society member (2): Damm it, hey seems like we have alert the others. This gona be FUN!!!! Whahahahahahaha
Chief Commander (3) Crusine: what kind of guy he is?! Sir (old sage), are you alright there.
Old Sage: This guy is a piece of cake to me.
Morgen Society member (1): Piece of cake!!! Seems like you have underestimate me too. I have no choice, Activate gate demon gate now Joshua.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: OK!! Finally we are going to use that…
Old Sage and Crusine: Demon Gate??
Both the Morgen society member use their elemtn of Demon to create a gate that link from other dimension and let creatures that they have train to join the fight.
Crusine: This is no good, what are we going to do Old Sage.
Morgen Society member (1): There are still more, combination of Demon and water element, change Dimension.
Suddenly the Old Sage, Crusine and Magnus were drag into a weird place, nothing except them, the 2 society member and the Demon gate.
Old Sage: Right now be careful. Crusine protect Magnus.
Crusine: OK, but what about you?
Old Sage: I will fight with them.
Crusine: But…
With a smile on his face
Old Sage: Trust me, I will defeat them.
Morgen Society member (1) and (2): OPEN NOW THE DEMON GATE!!!
With their hands raise up... The Demon gate open, Thousand of monster came out from that gate.
Old Sage: Seems they made me take this move… Summon the mystic bear!!!
Crusine: My first time saw a sage summoning creature. Cleavire( Crusine summoning creature name) go help the Sage.
Cleavire: OK!!!
Magnus was terrified, he couldn’t make nay move.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: Do you think an old sage like you together with these 2 weak summoning monster can defeat the entire troop of monster. HAHAHAHA. Let me tell you, DIE YOU OLD FOOL. Little brat, you are next. Hahahahaha
Magnus: I am going to die, we are going to die.
Crusine: What are you saying, come on you are a warrior from AlusMillieum, you can’t defeat by those guy. Instead you MUST WIN.
Magnus: How? Only 3 of us and 2 summoning creature, how can we win. They have a thousand of them, how can we win.
Spirit Doll speak from Magnus heart
Spirit Doll: I am here too… I will fight together with you.
Crusine: A spirit doll, I haven’t seen this before. And Magnus, you must trust your spirit doll. Trust it.
Meanwhile, Old Sage and the 2 summoning are on their limit.
Old Sage: Combine water and earth element, Sinking ground!
Some monster have sink under the ground, but old sage reach his limit.
Crusine: Oh no Sage has reached his limit. I have to help him.
Old Sage: No Crusine, your mission now is to protect Magnus. I can still fight.
Magnus: Why, why you guys have to protect me? WHY!!!!
Crusine: That’s because we need to protect what we need to protect. As a warrior you have to protect everyone against the evil.
Magnus think about his father saying before his father die…
Magnus’ father: Son, protect those you need to protect. Do what is right, fight against the people who break their road of justice.
Magnus: Yeah! I have to protect, protect everyone that need to be protected,
My mom, friends, president, old man and all those who care about me.
Magnus: This time I will fight back!!!
Crusine was shocked as well as the old sage.
Magnus: I am going to destroy those who break their own road of justice!!!
Old Sage: Road of justice… Don’t tell me.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: He meant us? Hahaha. You are just a newbie, how can you able to defeat us, even though you have an advance element and a legendary sword.
An aura came out from Magnus body.
Magnus: ahhhhhh!!
Magnus killed every monster that stand in front of him. But its way too many for Magnus to kill.
Magnus: The monster just keep coming non stop.
Spirit Doll: Use dragon divine slash.
Magnus: Dragon Divine slash??
Spirit Doll: Ya dragon divine slash.
Magnus: How?
Spirit Doll: Do you trust me?
Magnus: Ya guess so.
Spirit Doll: Let me fuse with your soul.
Magnus: WHAT!!
Spirit Doll: Trust me. Please trust me.
Magnus: OK!
Spirit Doll fuses with Magnus Soul…
A monster tried to attack Magnus… chief commander Crusine stop it by slash it by his saber.
Crusine: Hey what you doing?
A sudden power appear on Magnus.
Old Sage: What is this kind of power?
Crusine: What the hell is going on?
Morgen Society member (1): Seems like he is going real this time.
Spirit Doll: NOW!
Magnus swing his sword…
Magnus: Dragon Divine Slash!!!!
A white dragon appears and destroys those entire monsters and destroys the demon gate in a split second.
Crusine: What kind of power is that? No way a young kid like him to have such an incredible power.
Seems like Magnus had an incredible power, but will the Morgen society member lose just like that? Also it seems like Old Sage know about Magnus father. Is it or not see the next chapter, Chapter 8: Last resort, Demon heart Bow Vs Divine dragon sword.
Old Sage: Can Magnus win the dark society member… He doesn’t have any fighting experience.
Morgen Society member (1): Hey old fool, try to take care of yourself first before concerning that brat.
Old Sage: Do you really think that I will lose to you. Don’t ever underestimate the Sage.
Meanwhile… Magnus was facing his first battle with one of the Morgen Society member.
Morgen Society member (2) draw out his saber, together with his element demon. He made a direct attack on Magnus. The Morgen society member speed was too fast that Magnus was unable to react. And a slash was given to Magnus left arm.
Magnus: His speed was too fast.
Morgen Society member (2): DIE YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!!
Golden Crush!!! Golden spiked edge pop up from the ground and injured Morgen Society member (2) right leg. A shark creature takes Magnus to a safe place.
Magnus: Who are you?? Are you here to capture me?
Shark: Don’t worry you are safe now, my master will settle everything.
Chief Commander (3) Crusine: Now your opponent is ME, Crusine.
Morgen Society member (2): Damm it, hey seems like we have alert the others. This gona be FUN!!!! Whahahahahahaha
Chief Commander (3) Crusine: what kind of guy he is?! Sir (old sage), are you alright there.
Old Sage: This guy is a piece of cake to me.
Morgen Society member (1): Piece of cake!!! Seems like you have underestimate me too. I have no choice, Activate gate demon gate now Joshua.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: OK!! Finally we are going to use that…
Old Sage and Crusine: Demon Gate??
Both the Morgen society member use their elemtn of Demon to create a gate that link from other dimension and let creatures that they have train to join the fight.
Crusine: This is no good, what are we going to do Old Sage.
Morgen Society member (1): There are still more, combination of Demon and water element, change Dimension.
Suddenly the Old Sage, Crusine and Magnus were drag into a weird place, nothing except them, the 2 society member and the Demon gate.
Old Sage: Right now be careful. Crusine protect Magnus.
Crusine: OK, but what about you?
Old Sage: I will fight with them.
Crusine: But…
With a smile on his face
Old Sage: Trust me, I will defeat them.
Morgen Society member (1) and (2): OPEN NOW THE DEMON GATE!!!
With their hands raise up... The Demon gate open, Thousand of monster came out from that gate.
Old Sage: Seems they made me take this move… Summon the mystic bear!!!
Crusine: My first time saw a sage summoning creature. Cleavire( Crusine summoning creature name) go help the Sage.
Cleavire: OK!!!
Magnus was terrified, he couldn’t make nay move.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: Do you think an old sage like you together with these 2 weak summoning monster can defeat the entire troop of monster. HAHAHAHA. Let me tell you, DIE YOU OLD FOOL. Little brat, you are next. Hahahahaha
Magnus: I am going to die, we are going to die.
Crusine: What are you saying, come on you are a warrior from AlusMillieum, you can’t defeat by those guy. Instead you MUST WIN.
Magnus: How? Only 3 of us and 2 summoning creature, how can we win. They have a thousand of them, how can we win.
Spirit Doll speak from Magnus heart
Spirit Doll: I am here too… I will fight together with you.
Crusine: A spirit doll, I haven’t seen this before. And Magnus, you must trust your spirit doll. Trust it.
Meanwhile, Old Sage and the 2 summoning are on their limit.
Old Sage: Combine water and earth element, Sinking ground!
Some monster have sink under the ground, but old sage reach his limit.
Crusine: Oh no Sage has reached his limit. I have to help him.
Old Sage: No Crusine, your mission now is to protect Magnus. I can still fight.
Magnus: Why, why you guys have to protect me? WHY!!!!
Crusine: That’s because we need to protect what we need to protect. As a warrior you have to protect everyone against the evil.
Magnus think about his father saying before his father die…
Magnus’ father: Son, protect those you need to protect. Do what is right, fight against the people who break their road of justice.
Magnus: Yeah! I have to protect, protect everyone that need to be protected,
My mom, friends, president, old man and all those who care about me.
Magnus: This time I will fight back!!!
Crusine was shocked as well as the old sage.
Magnus: I am going to destroy those who break their own road of justice!!!
Old Sage: Road of justice… Don’t tell me.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: He meant us? Hahaha. You are just a newbie, how can you able to defeat us, even though you have an advance element and a legendary sword.
An aura came out from Magnus body.
Magnus: ahhhhhh!!
Magnus killed every monster that stand in front of him. But its way too many for Magnus to kill.
Magnus: The monster just keep coming non stop.
Spirit Doll: Use dragon divine slash.
Magnus: Dragon Divine slash??
Spirit Doll: Ya dragon divine slash.
Magnus: How?
Spirit Doll: Do you trust me?
Magnus: Ya guess so.
Spirit Doll: Let me fuse with your soul.
Magnus: WHAT!!
Spirit Doll: Trust me. Please trust me.
Magnus: OK!
Spirit Doll fuses with Magnus Soul…
A monster tried to attack Magnus… chief commander Crusine stop it by slash it by his saber.
Crusine: Hey what you doing?
A sudden power appear on Magnus.
Old Sage: What is this kind of power?
Crusine: What the hell is going on?
Morgen Society member (1): Seems like he is going real this time.
Spirit Doll: NOW!
Magnus swing his sword…
Magnus: Dragon Divine Slash!!!!
A white dragon appears and destroys those entire monsters and destroys the demon gate in a split second.
Crusine: What kind of power is that? No way a young kid like him to have such an incredible power.
Seems like Magnus had an incredible power, but will the Morgen society member lose just like that? Also it seems like Old Sage know about Magnus father. Is it or not see the next chapter, Chapter 8: Last resort, Demon heart Bow Vs Divine dragon sword.
Tuesday, February 13, 2007
About me
Finally done up to chapter 6, next chapter cant figure out what to write. One week at home also nothing to do. Chinese new year coming, need to study for exam soon. This week is my anime week, cause naruto hurrican chronicle starts this thursday and Bleach Histugaya came to the real world is COOOLLLLLLLLLL!! cant wait to watch. And off course death note, Waiting for it to come out on crunchyroll. Hope to get some idea from these few anime and also I recommend Ragnarok the animation is quite nice.... Ok gona play with my game... byeeee
Monday, February 12, 2007
Chapter 6
Chapter 6: The true power of Tian
Old sage: Tiny brat, now I am going to teach you how to activate your weapon according to your element soul.
Magnus: Element Soul?
Old Sage: Yes, different type of people holds different type of weapon. Some people obtain a saber, but some people obtian dagger.
Magnus: Hmm... What will I obtain?
Old Sage: Dont know...
Magnus: I though An old sage knows everything.
Old Sage thinking: I also wonder what you might be getting...
Magnus imagin that he would obtain a ultra large sword or a ultimate strong axe...
Old Sage: Dont waste anymore time, let get started.
Magnus: OK! Hmmm where are we going now, not female domain again?
Old sage: Off course not, we are going to...
Weapon storage room.
Magnus: Why are we coming here for?
Old Sage: Magnus, give me a moment. I gona get you a weapon.
Old sage went in to the weapon storage room.
Magnus thinking: I though the type of weapon that I will be getting is depend on my element soul.... hmm why? Crap I still cant figure it out.
Old sage: Come on Magnus, come on in.
Magnus went into the weapon storage room, It was strongly guarded by 16 1st rate warrior under the command of the 1st cheif commander.
Old Sage: Come on Magnus, come over here.
Magnus went towards the old sage.
Old Sage: Tiny brat, hold onto this handle.
Magnus: Whats this handle for.
Old Sage: Oh Oh! This handle determins what kind/type of weapon you will be obtaining.
Magnus: Weird handle, can it really make the decision.
Handle: Are you supecting of my ability.
Magnus was shocked...
Magnus WAHHHHH!!!!!! A HANDLE CAN TALK WTH!!!!!
Old Sage Laugh: Hahaha.. Renga, you really made all the newcomer shocker when you first open your mouth.
Renga the handle: Ya I guess so.
Magnus: Are you a human?
Renga: No.
Magnus: You mean you are a ghost?!!!
Renga: Off course not.
Old Sage: Renga is a magical item that can determin whether a person is suitable of which kind of weapon. I am one of the creator of Renga.
Magnus: OH I see.
Old Sage: Dont waste any more time, Come on put your hands on the handle.
Magnus: OK!
Meanwhile, Alusian on the way back to his guild. 2 of the Morgen society member appear.
President from AlusMillieum: You 2 again. Last time I let you escape, but now I won't.
Morgen society Member (1): Relax, we came here not to start a fight, but to have a deal with you.
President from AlusMillieum: Deal?
Morgen society Member (2): Ya, all we wanted is...
President from AlusMillieum: What is it that you guys want?
Morgen society Member (2): Magnus' element of Tian.
President from AlusMillieum: NO WAY!
Morgen society Member (1): Seems like we have no choice... Lets go..
The Morgen society member summon the twin headed eagle and went off.
President from AlusMillieum: Where can they go? Oh no.
While Alusian calling his assistant...
Old Sage: Ok, it's going to appear.
Magnus: Come ON!! NOWW!!!!
A white light shone and it appear to be a spirit doll???
Old Sage: Spirit doll??
Spirit Doll: Hi Magnus. Nice to meet you.
Magnus: Nice to meet you too. Hey old man is this my weapon?
Old Sage: guess so!! and you are full of surprize.
Magnus: No way!! I though I will be getting some sort of cool weapon...
Magnus crying!!!!
Renga: Oh a spirit doll, thats a good weapon.
Magnus: What do you mean good? Dont try to pity me.
Old sage: Renga is right, it is a good weapon for you.
Spirit doll: Yea yea.
Old Sage: Trust me.
Fighting sound came from the entrence guild.
Old Sage, Magnus and the spirit doll rush out to see what had happen.
Old Sage: Switch on the siren, one of you. NOW!
One of the 1st rate warrior: Yes.
The warrior try to switch on the siren...
One of the 1st rate warrior: Sir the siren seems to be broken down...
Old Sage: What!! Now we cant contact the chief and vice chief commander. We have to depend on ourself.
Old sage look at Magnus
Old Sage: Magnus, use your spirit doll now, and see the power of the spirit doll yourself.
Magnus: How am I going to ativate it?
Spirit doll: Place your arm on my forehead, and focus your energy on that arm.
Magnus: Looks like I have no choice but to try.
Magnus focus his energy onto his right arm and place his right arm on the spirit doll forehead.
The spirit doll fuse into Magnus right arm.
Magnus right arm turn into a Divine Dragon sword.
Magnus: So this is the...
Old Sage: One of the Ultimate element sword , Divine Dragon Sword.
Old Sage: Come Magnus, lets rush to the guild entrence now, before its too late.
Magnus: OK!
Old Sage and Magnus rush to the entrence.
Morgen society member (1): Oh Oh, seems like our target is here..
Morgen society member (2): Magnus, come with us NOW!!!
Morgen Society member (1) start attacking together with the twin headed eagle on the Old Sage
While Morgen society member (2) launch his attack on Magnus.
Magnus use his sword to counter his attack..
Morgen society member (2): Seems like you has already gotten hold of the weapon from the element of Tian. So, I have no choice but to destory you!!
Magnus: Come on let's get this over WITH!!!
Will reinforcement be able to arrive on time, will Magnus able to win his first fight. See the next chapter, Chapter 7: The battle begins...
Old sage: Tiny brat, now I am going to teach you how to activate your weapon according to your element soul.
Magnus: Element Soul?
Old Sage: Yes, different type of people holds different type of weapon. Some people obtain a saber, but some people obtian dagger.
Magnus: Hmm... What will I obtain?
Old Sage: Dont know...
Magnus: I though An old sage knows everything.
Old Sage thinking: I also wonder what you might be getting...
Magnus imagin that he would obtain a ultra large sword or a ultimate strong axe...
Old Sage: Dont waste anymore time, let get started.
Magnus: OK! Hmmm where are we going now, not female domain again?
Old sage: Off course not, we are going to...
Weapon storage room.
Magnus: Why are we coming here for?
Old Sage: Magnus, give me a moment. I gona get you a weapon.
Old sage went in to the weapon storage room.
Magnus thinking: I though the type of weapon that I will be getting is depend on my element soul.... hmm why? Crap I still cant figure it out.
Old sage: Come on Magnus, come on in.
Magnus went into the weapon storage room, It was strongly guarded by 16 1st rate warrior under the command of the 1st cheif commander.
Old Sage: Come on Magnus, come over here.
Magnus went towards the old sage.
Old Sage: Tiny brat, hold onto this handle.
Magnus: Whats this handle for.
Old Sage: Oh Oh! This handle determins what kind/type of weapon you will be obtaining.
Magnus: Weird handle, can it really make the decision.
Handle: Are you supecting of my ability.
Magnus was shocked...
Magnus WAHHHHH!!!!!! A HANDLE CAN TALK WTH!!!!!
Old Sage Laugh: Hahaha.. Renga, you really made all the newcomer shocker when you first open your mouth.
Renga the handle: Ya I guess so.
Magnus: Are you a human?
Renga: No.
Magnus: You mean you are a ghost?!!!
Renga: Off course not.
Old Sage: Renga is a magical item that can determin whether a person is suitable of which kind of weapon. I am one of the creator of Renga.
Magnus: OH I see.
Old Sage: Dont waste any more time, Come on put your hands on the handle.
Magnus: OK!
Meanwhile, Alusian on the way back to his guild. 2 of the Morgen society member appear.
President from AlusMillieum: You 2 again. Last time I let you escape, but now I won't.
Morgen society Member (1): Relax, we came here not to start a fight, but to have a deal with you.
President from AlusMillieum: Deal?
Morgen society Member (2): Ya, all we wanted is...
President from AlusMillieum: What is it that you guys want?
Morgen society Member (2): Magnus' element of Tian.
President from AlusMillieum: NO WAY!
Morgen society Member (1): Seems like we have no choice... Lets go..
The Morgen society member summon the twin headed eagle and went off.
President from AlusMillieum: Where can they go? Oh no.
While Alusian calling his assistant...
Old Sage: Ok, it's going to appear.
Magnus: Come ON!! NOWW!!!!
A white light shone and it appear to be a spirit doll???
Old Sage: Spirit doll??
Spirit Doll: Hi Magnus. Nice to meet you.
Magnus: Nice to meet you too. Hey old man is this my weapon?
Old Sage: guess so!! and you are full of surprize.
Magnus: No way!! I though I will be getting some sort of cool weapon...
Magnus crying!!!!
Renga: Oh a spirit doll, thats a good weapon.
Magnus: What do you mean good? Dont try to pity me.
Old sage: Renga is right, it is a good weapon for you.
Spirit doll: Yea yea.
Old Sage: Trust me.
Fighting sound came from the entrence guild.
Old Sage, Magnus and the spirit doll rush out to see what had happen.
Old Sage: Switch on the siren, one of you. NOW!
One of the 1st rate warrior: Yes.
The warrior try to switch on the siren...
One of the 1st rate warrior: Sir the siren seems to be broken down...
Old Sage: What!! Now we cant contact the chief and vice chief commander. We have to depend on ourself.
Old sage look at Magnus
Old Sage: Magnus, use your spirit doll now, and see the power of the spirit doll yourself.
Magnus: How am I going to ativate it?
Spirit doll: Place your arm on my forehead, and focus your energy on that arm.
Magnus: Looks like I have no choice but to try.
Magnus focus his energy onto his right arm and place his right arm on the spirit doll forehead.
The spirit doll fuse into Magnus right arm.
Magnus right arm turn into a Divine Dragon sword.
Magnus: So this is the...
Old Sage: One of the Ultimate element sword , Divine Dragon Sword.
Old Sage: Come Magnus, lets rush to the guild entrence now, before its too late.
Magnus: OK!
Old Sage and Magnus rush to the entrence.
Morgen society member (1): Oh Oh, seems like our target is here..
Morgen society member (2): Magnus, come with us NOW!!!
Morgen Society member (1) start attacking together with the twin headed eagle on the Old Sage
While Morgen society member (2) launch his attack on Magnus.
Magnus use his sword to counter his attack..
Morgen society member (2): Seems like you has already gotten hold of the weapon from the element of Tian. So, I have no choice but to destory you!!
Magnus: Come on let's get this over WITH!!!
Will reinforcement be able to arrive on time, will Magnus able to win his first fight. See the next chapter, Chapter 7: The battle begins...
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