Chapter 10: 10 days training complete!
Plikamillieum guild, in the middle of chaos.
6th chief commander from Plikamillieum: Sir, the necklace is gone.
Plikamillieum president: What, search for it NOW!
6th chief commander from Plikamillieum: Yes sir. Warriors search the entire guild now.
Warriors: Yes sir.
Plikamillieum president: Gosh! How can this thing be happening.
TCS: Whats that necklaces, is that something important?
Plikamillieum president: Yeah, its one of our guild treasure. With that necklace, it can boost the user element power beyond the user limit. If it falls to the wrong hand, it would be terrible.
Plikamillieum president was angry and worried about the present situation.
Plikamillieum president: Come TCS, lets go to the plika dungeon now.
TCS: Dungeon? Is that the place whee the necklace been kept?
Plikamillieum president: Yeah, the dungeon is suppose to be protected by 6th chief commander and 8th chief commander. I wonder who got the power to sneak inside the dungeon, without letting 2 chief commander noticing him/her.
TCS: Seems like the thief is someone who is strong. Even president is worried.
Plikamillieum president: Lets not waste any more time. Lets go.
TCS: Yeah.
While Plikamillieum president and TCS rushing to the Plika dungeon...
Memebers of Yongzan society(1): So they think that those 2 idiot commader can detect us with thier useless skills, hahah no way.
Memebers of Yongzan society(2): Keep your voice down, so we have complete our task. Lets go back to the leader tribe.
Leader tribe is a place where all dark society leader gather for meeting.
Memebers of Yongzan society(3): Wait, I still need to do something. Set bomb on this guild, seeing the president makes me mad. He will pay for what he did to me.
Memebers of Yongzan society(2): Okok, do it quick.
Memebers of Yongzan society(3): Yeah!
Memebers of Yongzan society(3) rush to the dungeon and plant the bomb at the entrence.
Memebers of Yongzan society(3): Done!
Memebers of Yongzan society(2): Lets go!
The 3 Yongzan society member turn themself into dark mud and disappear.
After 2 months in the diemension for Magnus.
Magnus: Yea, finally I have finish running.
Krink: What, so fast?! How can it be, my first time record was 4 rounds for 3 months. Due to the pressure and the gravity on this diemension, I was being force to exit this diemension. And you finish 10 rounds in 2 months? No way!
Old Sage: Hahaha. just as I expected.
Krink and Magnus was blurr...
Krink and Magnus: Huh, expected what?
Old Sage: Expected that you can easily overcome this kind of enviroment at this particular place.
Magnus: Why?
Krink: Oh I see.
Old Sage: That's because, this place is created by your father.
Magnus: My father?
Old Sage: Yeah, he is a genius. He created this by his own.
Magnus: Wow, I didnt know my father is that awesome. Why didnt you tell me earlier?
Old Sage: Magnus, you know why you have been selected to come to this guild?
Magnus: President say that I have an advance element and is a rare one.
Old Sage: Hahaha, knew he would say that. But Magnus: Let me tell you something, Alusian is your father best friend and also he is your god father.
Magnus: WHAT! Alusian is my god father?!
Krink: I never heard of that before.
Old Sage: Off course, I was the only witness of this god father and god son ceremony. It was at that time when your father had to face one of his mission. That is to kill one dark society leader.
Your father knew that he wont be able to come back alive, so he made Alsuain your God father, in any case he is kill in the mission.
Magnus: So that's how my father die. So why Alusian didnt tell me that he is my god father.
Old Sage: Hmmmm....
Krink interrupt: To the main point, why Magnus can train in this diemension with advantage?
Old Sage: Magnus' father wanted to give his son the best place to train, and to defend himself from the dark society members. That's because.....
Magnus: Thats because on my father last mission, he kill one of the dark society member, and die. The dark society wanted revenge on me, right?
Old Sage: Oh ya, thats right. This place is specially suited for people who have the element of Tian. For those who did not have the element of Tian, would have to try hard to stay o this diemension.
Krink: No wonder Magnus can run so fast in this place. Ok Magnus its time to start the next training, gogogo.
Magnus: Ok, I won't let my father down.
Leader Tribe.
Dark society leader: So hows the 2nd task going?
Yongzen society leader: Task complete, we got the necklace.
Dark society leader: Yongzen society leader, its your responsibility to protect the necklace at all cost.
Yongzen society leader: Right.
Dark society leader: Ok my fellow mates, lets get ready for the upcoming task.
Leaders: Yea.
Finally Magnus training is over.
Old Sage: Magnus, time to go home and rest, thats all for today.
Magnus: Ok!
They went out of the diemension and return to the real world.
Magnus: Ahhh! Its so tired, got to go home rest bye old sage and krink and help me to say goodbye to my god father too.
Old Sage: Ok! Ehh did he just say old Sage? Hahaha this kid is really growing up.
Magnus shouted: Oh should be old man byeee.
Old Sage: What the, he still havent grown about yet. sigh...
Krink: Got to go now bye old sage.
Old Sage: Bye.
Alusian appear behind old sage.
Alusian: Hey old man, seems like you have told Magnus about me and his father.
Old Sage: Ya, it is time for him to know.
Alusian: So did you tell him about that thing?
Old Sage: Not yet, it's not good for him to know that.
Alsuain: I see, yeah I have receive an urgent call from the sage headquarter. Something about Plikamillieum Neckalce.
Old Sage: Let's hurry.
Alusian: Ya.
Alusian and old sage went to the sage headquarter.
Finally the training has ended, Magnus have grown stronger than before. But can he defeat the other 9 rookie in the upcoming tournament? Whats the thing that the old sage and Alusmillieum kept from Magnus? Whats the dark society 3rd task. See the next chapter, Chapter 11: Gathering of the 10 rookie, the rumble is gona start!
Wednesday, February 28, 2007
Friday, February 23, 2007
Chapter 9
Chapter 9: Training on a special place!
Magnus in his dream..
Magnus talking to himself: Where am I? Am I dead? Did I lose?
Strange voice: You are not dead, I still need you. You are the source of my life. I can't let you die right now...
Magnus: Source of your life???
Strange voice: Yes, I need your power...
Magnus saw a shadow walking towards him...
Strange voice: I need you. Come Magnus, come. The world is unbalance, it needs you and your power to save the world.
Magnus: Why me? There are others who are stronger than me.
Strange voice: Its because...
Old Sage woke Magnus up.
Old Sage: Yo, Magnus. Time to wake up.
Magnus: Hey old man, oh president is here too.
President from AlusMillieum: You look fine now!
Magnus: Where am I? How many days I have been unconscious?
Old Sage: You are now at your bedroom and you have been unconscious for 8 days.
Magnus: 8 DAYS!!! Thats means I left with 1 more day of training before the event start.
President from AlusMillieum: Ya, I guess you can say that.
Magnus: Aren't you guys worry at all??
Old Sage: Why should I be worry? It's your own fame that will drop, not mine.
Magnus: But It will affect the guilds fame too.
President from Alusmillieum: AlusMillieum was in last in position on the last guild event, so it wont make any difference if this year Alusmillieum appear to be in last place. hahahahaha.
Magnus: Thats very irresponsible thing to say. Oh ya, what happen to the mrogen society member, is he dead or arrested?
Old Sage: Neither.
Magnus: WHAT!!! It cant be, I know that I have injured him. How can he...
Old Sage: It was just a clay doll. A clay doll use as a tool to check on you Magnus.
Magnus was confuse.
Magnus: A clay doll??
President from AlusMillieum: A clay doll, unlike a robot or puppet, which is being control by their master. The master will just need to transfer part of their power to the clay doll. Only people with high level of element power is able to do this. On top of that, producing clay doll is a high level element technique which require the combination of 3 advance elements and 2 basic elements. It usually takes 3 weeks to complete 1 clay doll. The master of the clay doll will only transfer 10 to 20 percent of their normal power to the doll...
Magnus: 10 to 20 percent. Thats mean my power level is...
Old Sage: Very low! but never mind, Alusian and I will train you, there's still lots of time.
President from AlusMillieum thinking: I wonder what is their motive and when will they strike again.
Old Sage: OK lets go for our last day of training.
Magnus: OK!
Old Sage: Before that, please take a bath. cause YOU NEVER BATH FOR 8 DAYS AND YOU ARE STINK.
Magnus: OKOK!! hehehe.
dark organization meeting
Head of the dark oragnization: So hows the data collection, Morgen society leader?
Morgen society leader: That kid, has just merely survive on one of my warrior's clay doll.
Drokin society leader: Hmm, first task achieve, test the kid power. So whats the next task?
Elison society leader: 2 more days is the test for the ten rookie, shall we...
Head of the dark organization: Lets start with the next task, Yongzan society leader, do what you need to do for the next tasks. As for the rest of you, you guys shall proceed to the third task.
Hanze society leader: Ohh! Finally the third task, its the beginning of the battle.
Head of the dark organization: I will hand the detail of the third task to the society leader who are involve in the third task. DISMISS...
Magnus finish his bath, but he couldnt find old sage and the president.
Magnus: Mum, where is the old man and the president?
Magnus' Mum: What old man, he is a sage after all. and....
Magnus: And what?
Magnus' Mum: Oh nothing. they gone back to the guild, and ask you to report back to the guild asap.
Magnus: Ok! bye mum!
Magnus' Mum: Remeber to close the door!
Magnus: OK!
Magnus quickly ran to Alusmillieum guild, when he reach there...
Magnus: Hey old man.
Old Sage: Hey Magnus, let me introduce to you Krink, Alusmillieum best warrior. Today he and I will train you on your fighting skill and teach you some useful technique.
Magnus: OK!
Krink: 1 day is not enough for you to learn anything, so old sage and I had decide to bring you to another dimension to train.
Magnus: Huh! Another diemnsion?!
Old Sage: Ya, the time at the other diemension is much slower than the earth. So that mean if you train there for 1 day is equviant to 1 second on earth.
Magnus: Are you serious?!?!?!
Krink: Its true. I have been there once, but I only manage to train there for 3 months on the diemension.
Magnus: wow thats awesome. But why wont you continue longer.
Krink: Thats because there's a limit to every person depend on their body condition. The pressure there is very high and the gravity there is also very high. So its very diffcult to maintain more than 3 months over there. There is a condition inorder to go there.
Magnus: What condition?
Krink: The condition is that the user who is going to train must have at least one advance element. Thats why out of the 10 rookie, you are the only one who is quialified to train on the diemension.
Old Sage: Lets not waste any more time, lets go now!
Magnus: OK!
Old Sage, Krink and Magnus when to the diemension gate portal.
Old Sage: This is it Magnus, the gate to the diemension where Krink is talking about. Oh forget to tell you, Krink is the head guard of this place.
Magnus: Wow, you must be awesome.
Krink: Hahaha nothing at all. Come on lets go in now.
Magnus: Yeah training woot.
They went into the portal.
Magnus: Wow, this place is gigantic. and I felt heavy, its diffcult to even lift my arm. Breathing is also quite diffcult.
Krink: Thats why I told you not many people can survive this kind of enviroment. You need to get use to it quickly. The first training is to walk 10 time around the field.
Magnus: Ok! But its too diffcult.
Krink: I havent finsih my sentence, in the addition of wearing 10kg of the weights on your leg and hands.
Magnus: WHAT!!! Are you serious!!.
Krink: Yes! And if you cant finish the first training within 3 hours, you wont get your lunch.
Magnus: HUH!!! Is that some kind of punishment??
Krink: Yes.
Magnus Quickly walk as fast as he could, but his speed is just like turtle, with 10 time of the normal gravity and 40kg of the weights on him.
After 1 hour, Magnus has complete 4 rounds.
Old Sage: Not bad, seems like he can keep up with the enviroment here.
Krink: Sir, should we tell Magnus about the thing that the Morgen society said?
Old Sage: No, better dont let him know yet. If we tell him, we will only be distracting him.
Krink: About his father, shall we tell him..
Old Sage: Later, but not now. Its not the right time to tell him, even his mother keep it from him.
Krink: Ok.
What secret are they keeping from Magnus, and what is the dark society 2nd and 3rd plan. See the next chapter, Chapter 10: 10 days Training COMPLETE!
Magnus in his dream..
Magnus talking to himself: Where am I? Am I dead? Did I lose?
Strange voice: You are not dead, I still need you. You are the source of my life. I can't let you die right now...
Magnus: Source of your life???
Strange voice: Yes, I need your power...
Magnus saw a shadow walking towards him...
Strange voice: I need you. Come Magnus, come. The world is unbalance, it needs you and your power to save the world.
Magnus: Why me? There are others who are stronger than me.
Strange voice: Its because...
Old Sage woke Magnus up.
Old Sage: Yo, Magnus. Time to wake up.
Magnus: Hey old man, oh president is here too.
President from AlusMillieum: You look fine now!
Magnus: Where am I? How many days I have been unconscious?
Old Sage: You are now at your bedroom and you have been unconscious for 8 days.
Magnus: 8 DAYS!!! Thats means I left with 1 more day of training before the event start.
President from AlusMillieum: Ya, I guess you can say that.
Magnus: Aren't you guys worry at all??
Old Sage: Why should I be worry? It's your own fame that will drop, not mine.
Magnus: But It will affect the guilds fame too.
President from Alusmillieum: AlusMillieum was in last in position on the last guild event, so it wont make any difference if this year Alusmillieum appear to be in last place. hahahahaha.
Magnus: Thats very irresponsible thing to say. Oh ya, what happen to the mrogen society member, is he dead or arrested?
Old Sage: Neither.
Magnus: WHAT!!! It cant be, I know that I have injured him. How can he...
Old Sage: It was just a clay doll. A clay doll use as a tool to check on you Magnus.
Magnus was confuse.
Magnus: A clay doll??
President from AlusMillieum: A clay doll, unlike a robot or puppet, which is being control by their master. The master will just need to transfer part of their power to the clay doll. Only people with high level of element power is able to do this. On top of that, producing clay doll is a high level element technique which require the combination of 3 advance elements and 2 basic elements. It usually takes 3 weeks to complete 1 clay doll. The master of the clay doll will only transfer 10 to 20 percent of their normal power to the doll...
Magnus: 10 to 20 percent. Thats mean my power level is...
Old Sage: Very low! but never mind, Alusian and I will train you, there's still lots of time.
President from AlusMillieum thinking: I wonder what is their motive and when will they strike again.
Old Sage: OK lets go for our last day of training.
Magnus: OK!
Old Sage: Before that, please take a bath. cause YOU NEVER BATH FOR 8 DAYS AND YOU ARE STINK.
Magnus: OKOK!! hehehe.
dark organization meeting
Head of the dark oragnization: So hows the data collection, Morgen society leader?
Morgen society leader: That kid, has just merely survive on one of my warrior's clay doll.
Drokin society leader: Hmm, first task achieve, test the kid power. So whats the next task?
Elison society leader: 2 more days is the test for the ten rookie, shall we...
Head of the dark organization: Lets start with the next task, Yongzan society leader, do what you need to do for the next tasks. As for the rest of you, you guys shall proceed to the third task.
Hanze society leader: Ohh! Finally the third task, its the beginning of the battle.
Head of the dark organization: I will hand the detail of the third task to the society leader who are involve in the third task. DISMISS...
Magnus finish his bath, but he couldnt find old sage and the president.
Magnus: Mum, where is the old man and the president?
Magnus' Mum: What old man, he is a sage after all. and....
Magnus: And what?
Magnus' Mum: Oh nothing. they gone back to the guild, and ask you to report back to the guild asap.
Magnus: Ok! bye mum!
Magnus' Mum: Remeber to close the door!
Magnus: OK!
Magnus quickly ran to Alusmillieum guild, when he reach there...
Magnus: Hey old man.
Old Sage: Hey Magnus, let me introduce to you Krink, Alusmillieum best warrior. Today he and I will train you on your fighting skill and teach you some useful technique.
Magnus: OK!
Krink: 1 day is not enough for you to learn anything, so old sage and I had decide to bring you to another dimension to train.
Magnus: Huh! Another diemnsion?!
Old Sage: Ya, the time at the other diemension is much slower than the earth. So that mean if you train there for 1 day is equviant to 1 second on earth.
Magnus: Are you serious?!?!?!
Krink: Its true. I have been there once, but I only manage to train there for 3 months on the diemension.
Magnus: wow thats awesome. But why wont you continue longer.
Krink: Thats because there's a limit to every person depend on their body condition. The pressure there is very high and the gravity there is also very high. So its very diffcult to maintain more than 3 months over there. There is a condition inorder to go there.
Magnus: What condition?
Krink: The condition is that the user who is going to train must have at least one advance element. Thats why out of the 10 rookie, you are the only one who is quialified to train on the diemension.
Old Sage: Lets not waste any more time, lets go now!
Magnus: OK!
Old Sage, Krink and Magnus when to the diemension gate portal.
Old Sage: This is it Magnus, the gate to the diemension where Krink is talking about. Oh forget to tell you, Krink is the head guard of this place.
Magnus: Wow, you must be awesome.
Krink: Hahaha nothing at all. Come on lets go in now.
Magnus: Yeah training woot.
They went into the portal.
Magnus: Wow, this place is gigantic. and I felt heavy, its diffcult to even lift my arm. Breathing is also quite diffcult.
Krink: Thats why I told you not many people can survive this kind of enviroment. You need to get use to it quickly. The first training is to walk 10 time around the field.
Magnus: Ok! But its too diffcult.
Krink: I havent finsih my sentence, in the addition of wearing 10kg of the weights on your leg and hands.
Magnus: WHAT!!! Are you serious!!.
Krink: Yes! And if you cant finish the first training within 3 hours, you wont get your lunch.
Magnus: HUH!!! Is that some kind of punishment??
Krink: Yes.
Magnus Quickly walk as fast as he could, but his speed is just like turtle, with 10 time of the normal gravity and 40kg of the weights on him.
After 1 hour, Magnus has complete 4 rounds.
Old Sage: Not bad, seems like he can keep up with the enviroment here.
Krink: Sir, should we tell Magnus about the thing that the Morgen society said?
Old Sage: No, better dont let him know yet. If we tell him, we will only be distracting him.
Krink: About his father, shall we tell him..
Old Sage: Later, but not now. Its not the right time to tell him, even his mother keep it from him.
Krink: Ok.
What secret are they keeping from Magnus, and what is the dark society 2nd and 3rd plan. See the next chapter, Chapter 10: 10 days Training COMPLETE!
Monday, February 19, 2007
1st and 2nd day of my cny
Wah... 1st day of cny need to wake up soooooo early, tats the bad part of the first day of cny. My mother surely wake me up and say boy ah, wake up la dont sleep liao if not no red packet for you. After hearing that I force my body and my spirit to wake up, due to the temptation of red packet, actually is the content inside the red packet. Wake up, then bath and and clean myself, and eat steamboat early in the morning. Then eat too much liao stomachache, and do big business. After that my cousin ,aunt and uncle came. Collect red packets and play poker with my cousin, without $$. Cause i sure lose de. Then play chinese chess, play 4 time lose 4 time, quite pro actually, my cousin. Cause I am the one who lose 4 times.. After that eat steamboat again, but no more stomachache le hehe... Then my cousin and I went to my room and watch harry potter cause there is nothing to do.... then they went back... Then the fun part is here... OPEN RED PACKET WOOTTTT.... $$$$$$ wah lots of $$$$ but tats not all still got 2nd day..
2nd day of cny, still same thing happen need to wake up damm early again... But now it is to the amazing race. Dont know why the show at 9 am , I also dont know why la. But the show is nice. Damm nice. After that go to my grandma house collect red packet. And one of the red packet that i got has break my entire life record.... GUESS?!?!?! try and guess hehehe..... Then go to my cousin house play poker again then went home. after that you guess what happen. I WROTE THIS BLOG!!!!! hahahahaha The END
Next chapter will be posted at (try my best) before 1st of march
2nd day of cny, still same thing happen need to wake up damm early again... But now it is to the amazing race. Dont know why the show at 9 am , I also dont know why la. But the show is nice. Damm nice. After that go to my grandma house collect red packet. And one of the red packet that i got has break my entire life record.... GUESS?!?!?! try and guess hehehe..... Then go to my cousin house play poker again then went home. after that you guess what happen. I WROTE THIS BLOG!!!!! hahahahaha The END
Next chapter will be posted at (try my best) before 1st of march
Saturday, February 17, 2007
Woot finally description of Naruto 2 and my story
Finally Naruto 2 Naruto shippuden Hurrican is out, Gaara is now Kazekage. And the fight begins with Akatsuki first target at Naruto new series. Gaara Vs Akatsuki Deidara along with Sasori who defeat Kankuro. The real fight is going to begin. My story is also getting really exciting, Gathering of the 10 rookie. Showdown between the 10 new rookie who were being nominated by the 10 president from each guild... Who will win, who will be this year guild event champion guild. And what will the Morgen Society do after losing 1 of their member, will the Morgen society member take any action towards AlusMillieum espically Magnus who killed the member of the society? Or taking down other guild? Oh no what happen to my pic y become like tat!!!
Thursday, February 15, 2007
Chapter 8
Chapter 8: Last resort, Demon heart Bow Vs Divine dragon sword.
Morgen Society Member (2)Joshua: Oh wow, he got some skills... NICE... hahahaha. That's what I call a fight. Come on little brat, COME ON!!!!
Old Sage: Go Magnus, go. I will back you up.
Magnus: Thanks old man. Come on spirit doll, LET'S GO!!
Magnus dashed towards Morgen society member (2), but he manage the dodge Magnus attack.
Magnus: I can't catch up with his speed, Damm.
Morgen Society Member (2) Joshua: Is that what you got, little brat? What a disappointment.
What Joshua said had provoke Magnus. Magnus stand up and stare at Joshua...
Magnus: This time I will destory you!!!
Morgen Society Member (2) Joshua: Hahaha. Don't make me laugh. You can't even hit ....
Magnus gave a slash on Joshu right shoulder.
Morgen Society Member (2) Joshua: What the hell.... I can't sense his movement.
Morgen Society Member (1): Hey hey, don't be careless. If not, you may really die.
Morgen Society Member (2) Joshua: How dare you...
Old Sage: Hmm... It seems Magnus had grown alot from this fight.
Crusine: Magnus, I will help you...
Old sage stopped Crusine.
Old Sage: Don't help Magnus. Let him handle this alone.
Crusine: What!! Handle this alone, he can't he just a...
Old Sage hit Crusine head, and Crusine turn unconscious.
Magnus: Hey old man what happen to my back up, aren't you helping me?
Old Sage: Arrggg, my arm. I can't move my arm.
Magnus: What happen to Crusine, ask him to back me up. Can, old man?
Old Sage: He pass out.
Magnus: What!!! I think I can't rely on the two of you. I gona do this by myself.
Morgen Society Member (1): Now little brat, will you really think that you can beat us by yourself? Come on Joshua...
Morgen Society Member (2) Joshua: Finally!
Joshua ran towards his team-mate and fuse together with him.
Magnus: What are they doing? Is excatly the same thing that my spirit doll do to me... Don't tell me...
Morgen Society Member (1): Hahaha, let me show you my ultimate weapon... Demon heart Bow.
Old Sage thinking: Demon heart Bow. It's seems that the enemy has a very strong spirit doll which can activate element on its own. Seems like the tiny brat may not be able to win.
Magnus: Same as my divine dragon sword...
Morgen Society Member (1): Nono. Its totally different. The power level is totally different!!! Furthermore, you are too weak to control your weapon!
Magnus: Weak?! No way!
Morgen Society Member (1): Let me show you how weak you are... Demon bulleye strike.
Magnus: Its too fast!!!
Magnus' wing covered Magnus body and block away the attack.
Morgen Society Member (1): Ohoh, almost forgot about your idiotic wings. Let see how long can your wing last.
Morgen Society Member keep shooting arrow on Magnus since Magnus is unable to run away from his arrow. After 12 arrow was shot, Magnus' wing unable to take any more damage and was being dispell away.
Morgen Society Member (1): Hahaha, now without your wings, this will be my final shot and your final minute.
Magnus: Final minute!!!
Old Sage: Let's see what can Magnus do.
Spirit doll: Use Dragon shield Now!!! quick
Magnus: Oh OK!
Morgen Society Member (1): Say goodbye to the earth.hahahahahaha
Morgen Society Member shoot the arrow at Magnus.
Magnus: Dragon Shield! Acivate
A white dragon flew down from the sky and form a solid shield infront of Magnus. It protect Magnus from the arrow.
Morgen Society Member (1) was stun for a moment but...
Morgen Society Member (1): hahaha is that all you have got. All you know is protecting yourself. Like that you can't win me. Seems like I do not actually need to use my weapon to defeat you, I have overestimate you. hahahahaha.
Magnus smile.
Magnus: I think you have underestimate my dragon shield.
Morgen Society Member (1): WHAT!!
Magnus: Its real ability is reflecting damage to opponent. In other words...
Another white dragon appear behind Morgen Society member and shoot out the arrow on him.
Morgen Society Member (1): ARGGGGG! What the...
Magnus: Seems like I got you now.
Morgen Society Member (1): Nice try boy. Seems like I have to show the true power of my weapon.
Old Sage thinking: Wow, what a nice fight Magnus Divine dragon sword vs Morgen society member Demon heart Bow, wonder who will win. Its been a long time I havent watch this kind of fighting scene.
Magnus: True POWER??
Morgen Society Member (1): Come on little brat defeat me if you can. hahahaha. Hell Drake Shower...
Magnus: Dragon divine slash..
Two magnificient power clash, causes a big explosion to the both party. But only Magnus was seriously injured.
Morgen Society Member (1): Hahahaha. See, this is your level of your power.
Old Sage stands up.
Old Sage: Seems like yours is weaker than Magnus in ability of controlling the weapon.
Morgen Society Member (1): What!!
Magnus smile..
Magnus: You lost!
A white dragon appear behind Morgen Society Member and shoot back the attack back to Morgen Society Member.
Morgen Society Member (1): No way! I can't lose to this brat!!
Morgen Society Member fall flat on the ground and question Magnus.
Morgen Society Member (1): How and when did you cast that shield? TELL ME!!
Magnus: While you were mocking at me, when you tell me that you are showing your weapon true power. At that time I know that I can't win you just by using Dragon Divine slash. So I quickly cast the Dragon shield even before you could notice it. After that I quickly use Dragon divine slash to hide my dragon shield.
Morgen Society Member (1): But you are injured too..
Old Sage: I will explain, I think even Magnus also don't know the reason. The dragon shield only reflect back the opponent attack. Since its only reflect opponent attack, the explosion from the clash include Magnus attack so in return Magnus got hurt not by your attack instead he was injured by his own attack.
Magnus: Oh I see. Ehhhh didn't you hurt yourself that you can't even move.
Old Sage: Ehhh, its fine now.
Magnus: Crap I been tricked.
Old Sage: Come on, you did well your first fight.
Magnus: Thanks old...
Magnus faint. The old sage manage to get him before he bump onto the ground
Old Sage: So you understand now, how powerful he really is.
Morgen Society Member (1): Ya, he is a good one...
Morgen Society Member was passed away before he could finish his sentence.
Old Sage: Seems like the fight has ended for now.
The dimension that the Morgen Society Member had created has slowly disappear.
Finally, the battle is over. What will be next for Magnus? See the next chapter, Chapter 9: Training on a special place!
Morgen Society Member (2)Joshua: Oh wow, he got some skills... NICE... hahahaha. That's what I call a fight. Come on little brat, COME ON!!!!
Old Sage: Go Magnus, go. I will back you up.
Magnus: Thanks old man. Come on spirit doll, LET'S GO!!
Magnus dashed towards Morgen society member (2), but he manage the dodge Magnus attack.
Magnus: I can't catch up with his speed, Damm.
Morgen Society Member (2) Joshua: Is that what you got, little brat? What a disappointment.
What Joshua said had provoke Magnus. Magnus stand up and stare at Joshua...
Magnus: This time I will destory you!!!
Morgen Society Member (2) Joshua: Hahaha. Don't make me laugh. You can't even hit ....
Magnus gave a slash on Joshu right shoulder.
Morgen Society Member (2) Joshua: What the hell.... I can't sense his movement.
Morgen Society Member (1): Hey hey, don't be careless. If not, you may really die.
Morgen Society Member (2) Joshua: How dare you...
Old Sage: Hmm... It seems Magnus had grown alot from this fight.
Crusine: Magnus, I will help you...
Old sage stopped Crusine.
Old Sage: Don't help Magnus. Let him handle this alone.
Crusine: What!! Handle this alone, he can't he just a...
Old Sage hit Crusine head, and Crusine turn unconscious.
Magnus: Hey old man what happen to my back up, aren't you helping me?
Old Sage: Arrggg, my arm. I can't move my arm.
Magnus: What happen to Crusine, ask him to back me up. Can, old man?
Old Sage: He pass out.
Magnus: What!!! I think I can't rely on the two of you. I gona do this by myself.
Morgen Society Member (1): Now little brat, will you really think that you can beat us by yourself? Come on Joshua...
Morgen Society Member (2) Joshua: Finally!
Joshua ran towards his team-mate and fuse together with him.
Magnus: What are they doing? Is excatly the same thing that my spirit doll do to me... Don't tell me...
Morgen Society Member (1): Hahaha, let me show you my ultimate weapon... Demon heart Bow.
Old Sage thinking: Demon heart Bow. It's seems that the enemy has a very strong spirit doll which can activate element on its own. Seems like the tiny brat may not be able to win.
Magnus: Same as my divine dragon sword...
Morgen Society Member (1): Nono. Its totally different. The power level is totally different!!! Furthermore, you are too weak to control your weapon!
Magnus: Weak?! No way!
Morgen Society Member (1): Let me show you how weak you are... Demon bulleye strike.
Magnus: Its too fast!!!
Magnus' wing covered Magnus body and block away the attack.
Morgen Society Member (1): Ohoh, almost forgot about your idiotic wings. Let see how long can your wing last.
Morgen Society Member keep shooting arrow on Magnus since Magnus is unable to run away from his arrow. After 12 arrow was shot, Magnus' wing unable to take any more damage and was being dispell away.
Morgen Society Member (1): Hahaha, now without your wings, this will be my final shot and your final minute.
Magnus: Final minute!!!
Old Sage: Let's see what can Magnus do.
Spirit doll: Use Dragon shield Now!!! quick
Magnus: Oh OK!
Morgen Society Member (1): Say goodbye to the earth.hahahahahaha
Morgen Society Member shoot the arrow at Magnus.
Magnus: Dragon Shield! Acivate
A white dragon flew down from the sky and form a solid shield infront of Magnus. It protect Magnus from the arrow.
Morgen Society Member (1) was stun for a moment but...
Morgen Society Member (1): hahaha is that all you have got. All you know is protecting yourself. Like that you can't win me. Seems like I do not actually need to use my weapon to defeat you, I have overestimate you. hahahahaha.
Magnus smile.
Magnus: I think you have underestimate my dragon shield.
Morgen Society Member (1): WHAT!!
Magnus: Its real ability is reflecting damage to opponent. In other words...
Another white dragon appear behind Morgen Society member and shoot out the arrow on him.
Morgen Society Member (1): ARGGGGG! What the...
Magnus: Seems like I got you now.
Morgen Society Member (1): Nice try boy. Seems like I have to show the true power of my weapon.
Old Sage thinking: Wow, what a nice fight Magnus Divine dragon sword vs Morgen society member Demon heart Bow, wonder who will win. Its been a long time I havent watch this kind of fighting scene.
Magnus: True POWER??
Morgen Society Member (1): Come on little brat defeat me if you can. hahahaha. Hell Drake Shower...
Magnus: Dragon divine slash..
Two magnificient power clash, causes a big explosion to the both party. But only Magnus was seriously injured.
Morgen Society Member (1): Hahahaha. See, this is your level of your power.
Old Sage stands up.
Old Sage: Seems like yours is weaker than Magnus in ability of controlling the weapon.
Morgen Society Member (1): What!!
Magnus smile..
Magnus: You lost!
A white dragon appear behind Morgen Society Member and shoot back the attack back to Morgen Society Member.
Morgen Society Member (1): No way! I can't lose to this brat!!
Morgen Society Member fall flat on the ground and question Magnus.
Morgen Society Member (1): How and when did you cast that shield? TELL ME!!
Magnus: While you were mocking at me, when you tell me that you are showing your weapon true power. At that time I know that I can't win you just by using Dragon Divine slash. So I quickly cast the Dragon shield even before you could notice it. After that I quickly use Dragon divine slash to hide my dragon shield.
Morgen Society Member (1): But you are injured too..
Old Sage: I will explain, I think even Magnus also don't know the reason. The dragon shield only reflect back the opponent attack. Since its only reflect opponent attack, the explosion from the clash include Magnus attack so in return Magnus got hurt not by your attack instead he was injured by his own attack.
Magnus: Oh I see. Ehhhh didn't you hurt yourself that you can't even move.
Old Sage: Ehhh, its fine now.
Magnus: Crap I been tricked.
Old Sage: Come on, you did well your first fight.
Magnus: Thanks old...
Magnus faint. The old sage manage to get him before he bump onto the ground
Old Sage: So you understand now, how powerful he really is.
Morgen Society Member (1): Ya, he is a good one...
Morgen Society Member was passed away before he could finish his sentence.
Old Sage: Seems like the fight has ended for now.
The dimension that the Morgen Society Member had created has slowly disappear.
Finally, the battle is over. What will be next for Magnus? See the next chapter, Chapter 9: Training on a special place!
Wednesday, February 14, 2007
about chap 7
This chap show some skill that Magnus possess and the Morgen society member. Finally a fighting chapter. Its really tough to write a fighting scene without the aid of picture. Hope you guys can picturise the scene...
Chapter 7
Chapter 7: The battle begin…
Old Sage: Can Magnus win the dark society member… He doesn’t have any fighting experience.
Morgen Society member (1): Hey old fool, try to take care of yourself first before concerning that brat.
Old Sage: Do you really think that I will lose to you. Don’t ever underestimate the Sage.
Meanwhile… Magnus was facing his first battle with one of the Morgen Society member.
Morgen Society member (2) draw out his saber, together with his element demon. He made a direct attack on Magnus. The Morgen society member speed was too fast that Magnus was unable to react. And a slash was given to Magnus left arm.
Magnus: His speed was too fast.
Morgen Society member (2): DIE YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!!
Golden Crush!!! Golden spiked edge pop up from the ground and injured Morgen Society member (2) right leg. A shark creature takes Magnus to a safe place.
Magnus: Who are you?? Are you here to capture me?
Shark: Don’t worry you are safe now, my master will settle everything.
Chief Commander (3) Crusine: Now your opponent is ME, Crusine.
Morgen Society member (2): Damm it, hey seems like we have alert the others. This gona be FUN!!!! Whahahahahahaha
Chief Commander (3) Crusine: what kind of guy he is?! Sir (old sage), are you alright there.
Old Sage: This guy is a piece of cake to me.
Morgen Society member (1): Piece of cake!!! Seems like you have underestimate me too. I have no choice, Activate gate demon gate now Joshua.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: OK!! Finally we are going to use that…
Old Sage and Crusine: Demon Gate??
Both the Morgen society member use their elemtn of Demon to create a gate that link from other dimension and let creatures that they have train to join the fight.
Crusine: This is no good, what are we going to do Old Sage.
Morgen Society member (1): There are still more, combination of Demon and water element, change Dimension.
Suddenly the Old Sage, Crusine and Magnus were drag into a weird place, nothing except them, the 2 society member and the Demon gate.
Old Sage: Right now be careful. Crusine protect Magnus.
Crusine: OK, but what about you?
Old Sage: I will fight with them.
Crusine: But…
With a smile on his face
Old Sage: Trust me, I will defeat them.
Morgen Society member (1) and (2): OPEN NOW THE DEMON GATE!!!
With their hands raise up... The Demon gate open, Thousand of monster came out from that gate.
Old Sage: Seems they made me take this move… Summon the mystic bear!!!
Crusine: My first time saw a sage summoning creature. Cleavire( Crusine summoning creature name) go help the Sage.
Cleavire: OK!!!
Magnus was terrified, he couldn’t make nay move.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: Do you think an old sage like you together with these 2 weak summoning monster can defeat the entire troop of monster. HAHAHAHA. Let me tell you, DIE YOU OLD FOOL. Little brat, you are next. Hahahahaha
Magnus: I am going to die, we are going to die.
Crusine: What are you saying, come on you are a warrior from AlusMillieum, you can’t defeat by those guy. Instead you MUST WIN.
Magnus: How? Only 3 of us and 2 summoning creature, how can we win. They have a thousand of them, how can we win.
Spirit Doll speak from Magnus heart
Spirit Doll: I am here too… I will fight together with you.
Crusine: A spirit doll, I haven’t seen this before. And Magnus, you must trust your spirit doll. Trust it.
Meanwhile, Old Sage and the 2 summoning are on their limit.
Old Sage: Combine water and earth element, Sinking ground!
Some monster have sink under the ground, but old sage reach his limit.
Crusine: Oh no Sage has reached his limit. I have to help him.
Old Sage: No Crusine, your mission now is to protect Magnus. I can still fight.
Magnus: Why, why you guys have to protect me? WHY!!!!
Crusine: That’s because we need to protect what we need to protect. As a warrior you have to protect everyone against the evil.
Magnus think about his father saying before his father die…
Magnus’ father: Son, protect those you need to protect. Do what is right, fight against the people who break their road of justice.
Magnus: Yeah! I have to protect, protect everyone that need to be protected,
My mom, friends, president, old man and all those who care about me.
Magnus: This time I will fight back!!!
Crusine was shocked as well as the old sage.
Magnus: I am going to destroy those who break their own road of justice!!!
Old Sage: Road of justice… Don’t tell me.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: He meant us? Hahaha. You are just a newbie, how can you able to defeat us, even though you have an advance element and a legendary sword.
An aura came out from Magnus body.
Magnus: ahhhhhh!!
Magnus killed every monster that stand in front of him. But its way too many for Magnus to kill.
Magnus: The monster just keep coming non stop.
Spirit Doll: Use dragon divine slash.
Magnus: Dragon Divine slash??
Spirit Doll: Ya dragon divine slash.
Magnus: How?
Spirit Doll: Do you trust me?
Magnus: Ya guess so.
Spirit Doll: Let me fuse with your soul.
Magnus: WHAT!!
Spirit Doll: Trust me. Please trust me.
Magnus: OK!
Spirit Doll fuses with Magnus Soul…
A monster tried to attack Magnus… chief commander Crusine stop it by slash it by his saber.
Crusine: Hey what you doing?
A sudden power appear on Magnus.
Old Sage: What is this kind of power?
Crusine: What the hell is going on?
Morgen Society member (1): Seems like he is going real this time.
Spirit Doll: NOW!
Magnus swing his sword…
Magnus: Dragon Divine Slash!!!!
A white dragon appears and destroys those entire monsters and destroys the demon gate in a split second.
Crusine: What kind of power is that? No way a young kid like him to have such an incredible power.
Seems like Magnus had an incredible power, but will the Morgen society member lose just like that? Also it seems like Old Sage know about Magnus father. Is it or not see the next chapter, Chapter 8: Last resort, Demon heart Bow Vs Divine dragon sword.
Old Sage: Can Magnus win the dark society member… He doesn’t have any fighting experience.
Morgen Society member (1): Hey old fool, try to take care of yourself first before concerning that brat.
Old Sage: Do you really think that I will lose to you. Don’t ever underestimate the Sage.
Meanwhile… Magnus was facing his first battle with one of the Morgen Society member.
Morgen Society member (2) draw out his saber, together with his element demon. He made a direct attack on Magnus. The Morgen society member speed was too fast that Magnus was unable to react. And a slash was given to Magnus left arm.
Magnus: His speed was too fast.
Morgen Society member (2): DIE YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!!
Golden Crush!!! Golden spiked edge pop up from the ground and injured Morgen Society member (2) right leg. A shark creature takes Magnus to a safe place.
Magnus: Who are you?? Are you here to capture me?
Shark: Don’t worry you are safe now, my master will settle everything.
Chief Commander (3) Crusine: Now your opponent is ME, Crusine.
Morgen Society member (2): Damm it, hey seems like we have alert the others. This gona be FUN!!!! Whahahahahahaha
Chief Commander (3) Crusine: what kind of guy he is?! Sir (old sage), are you alright there.
Old Sage: This guy is a piece of cake to me.
Morgen Society member (1): Piece of cake!!! Seems like you have underestimate me too. I have no choice, Activate gate demon gate now Joshua.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: OK!! Finally we are going to use that…
Old Sage and Crusine: Demon Gate??
Both the Morgen society member use their elemtn of Demon to create a gate that link from other dimension and let creatures that they have train to join the fight.
Crusine: This is no good, what are we going to do Old Sage.
Morgen Society member (1): There are still more, combination of Demon and water element, change Dimension.
Suddenly the Old Sage, Crusine and Magnus were drag into a weird place, nothing except them, the 2 society member and the Demon gate.
Old Sage: Right now be careful. Crusine protect Magnus.
Crusine: OK, but what about you?
Old Sage: I will fight with them.
Crusine: But…
With a smile on his face
Old Sage: Trust me, I will defeat them.
Morgen Society member (1) and (2): OPEN NOW THE DEMON GATE!!!
With their hands raise up... The Demon gate open, Thousand of monster came out from that gate.
Old Sage: Seems they made me take this move… Summon the mystic bear!!!
Crusine: My first time saw a sage summoning creature. Cleavire( Crusine summoning creature name) go help the Sage.
Cleavire: OK!!!
Magnus was terrified, he couldn’t make nay move.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: Do you think an old sage like you together with these 2 weak summoning monster can defeat the entire troop of monster. HAHAHAHA. Let me tell you, DIE YOU OLD FOOL. Little brat, you are next. Hahahahaha
Magnus: I am going to die, we are going to die.
Crusine: What are you saying, come on you are a warrior from AlusMillieum, you can’t defeat by those guy. Instead you MUST WIN.
Magnus: How? Only 3 of us and 2 summoning creature, how can we win. They have a thousand of them, how can we win.
Spirit Doll speak from Magnus heart
Spirit Doll: I am here too… I will fight together with you.
Crusine: A spirit doll, I haven’t seen this before. And Magnus, you must trust your spirit doll. Trust it.
Meanwhile, Old Sage and the 2 summoning are on their limit.
Old Sage: Combine water and earth element, Sinking ground!
Some monster have sink under the ground, but old sage reach his limit.
Crusine: Oh no Sage has reached his limit. I have to help him.
Old Sage: No Crusine, your mission now is to protect Magnus. I can still fight.
Magnus: Why, why you guys have to protect me? WHY!!!!
Crusine: That’s because we need to protect what we need to protect. As a warrior you have to protect everyone against the evil.
Magnus think about his father saying before his father die…
Magnus’ father: Son, protect those you need to protect. Do what is right, fight against the people who break their road of justice.
Magnus: Yeah! I have to protect, protect everyone that need to be protected,
My mom, friends, president, old man and all those who care about me.
Magnus: This time I will fight back!!!
Crusine was shocked as well as the old sage.
Magnus: I am going to destroy those who break their own road of justice!!!
Old Sage: Road of justice… Don’t tell me.
Morgen Society member (2) Joshua: He meant us? Hahaha. You are just a newbie, how can you able to defeat us, even though you have an advance element and a legendary sword.
An aura came out from Magnus body.
Magnus: ahhhhhh!!
Magnus killed every monster that stand in front of him. But its way too many for Magnus to kill.
Magnus: The monster just keep coming non stop.
Spirit Doll: Use dragon divine slash.
Magnus: Dragon Divine slash??
Spirit Doll: Ya dragon divine slash.
Magnus: How?
Spirit Doll: Do you trust me?
Magnus: Ya guess so.
Spirit Doll: Let me fuse with your soul.
Magnus: WHAT!!
Spirit Doll: Trust me. Please trust me.
Magnus: OK!
Spirit Doll fuses with Magnus Soul…
A monster tried to attack Magnus… chief commander Crusine stop it by slash it by his saber.
Crusine: Hey what you doing?
A sudden power appear on Magnus.
Old Sage: What is this kind of power?
Crusine: What the hell is going on?
Morgen Society member (1): Seems like he is going real this time.
Spirit Doll: NOW!
Magnus swing his sword…
Magnus: Dragon Divine Slash!!!!
A white dragon appears and destroys those entire monsters and destroys the demon gate in a split second.
Crusine: What kind of power is that? No way a young kid like him to have such an incredible power.
Seems like Magnus had an incredible power, but will the Morgen society member lose just like that? Also it seems like Old Sage know about Magnus father. Is it or not see the next chapter, Chapter 8: Last resort, Demon heart Bow Vs Divine dragon sword.
Tuesday, February 13, 2007
About me
Finally done up to chapter 6, next chapter cant figure out what to write. One week at home also nothing to do. Chinese new year coming, need to study for exam soon. This week is my anime week, cause naruto hurrican chronicle starts this thursday and Bleach Histugaya came to the real world is COOOLLLLLLLLLL!! cant wait to watch. And off course death note, Waiting for it to come out on crunchyroll. Hope to get some idea from these few anime and also I recommend Ragnarok the animation is quite nice.... Ok gona play with my game... byeeee
Monday, February 12, 2007
Chapter 6
Chapter 6: The true power of Tian
Old sage: Tiny brat, now I am going to teach you how to activate your weapon according to your element soul.
Magnus: Element Soul?
Old Sage: Yes, different type of people holds different type of weapon. Some people obtain a saber, but some people obtian dagger.
Magnus: Hmm... What will I obtain?
Old Sage: Dont know...
Magnus: I though An old sage knows everything.
Old Sage thinking: I also wonder what you might be getting...
Magnus imagin that he would obtain a ultra large sword or a ultimate strong axe...
Old Sage: Dont waste anymore time, let get started.
Magnus: OK! Hmmm where are we going now, not female domain again?
Old sage: Off course not, we are going to...
Weapon storage room.
Magnus: Why are we coming here for?
Old Sage: Magnus, give me a moment. I gona get you a weapon.
Old sage went in to the weapon storage room.
Magnus thinking: I though the type of weapon that I will be getting is depend on my element soul.... hmm why? Crap I still cant figure it out.
Old sage: Come on Magnus, come on in.
Magnus went into the weapon storage room, It was strongly guarded by 16 1st rate warrior under the command of the 1st cheif commander.
Old Sage: Come on Magnus, come over here.
Magnus went towards the old sage.
Old Sage: Tiny brat, hold onto this handle.
Magnus: Whats this handle for.
Old Sage: Oh Oh! This handle determins what kind/type of weapon you will be obtaining.
Magnus: Weird handle, can it really make the decision.
Handle: Are you supecting of my ability.
Magnus was shocked...
Magnus WAHHHHH!!!!!! A HANDLE CAN TALK WTH!!!!!
Old Sage Laugh: Hahaha.. Renga, you really made all the newcomer shocker when you first open your mouth.
Renga the handle: Ya I guess so.
Magnus: Are you a human?
Renga: No.
Magnus: You mean you are a ghost?!!!
Renga: Off course not.
Old Sage: Renga is a magical item that can determin whether a person is suitable of which kind of weapon. I am one of the creator of Renga.
Magnus: OH I see.
Old Sage: Dont waste any more time, Come on put your hands on the handle.
Magnus: OK!
Meanwhile, Alusian on the way back to his guild. 2 of the Morgen society member appear.
President from AlusMillieum: You 2 again. Last time I let you escape, but now I won't.
Morgen society Member (1): Relax, we came here not to start a fight, but to have a deal with you.
President from AlusMillieum: Deal?
Morgen society Member (2): Ya, all we wanted is...
President from AlusMillieum: What is it that you guys want?
Morgen society Member (2): Magnus' element of Tian.
President from AlusMillieum: NO WAY!
Morgen society Member (1): Seems like we have no choice... Lets go..
The Morgen society member summon the twin headed eagle and went off.
President from AlusMillieum: Where can they go? Oh no.
While Alusian calling his assistant...
Old Sage: Ok, it's going to appear.
Magnus: Come ON!! NOWW!!!!
A white light shone and it appear to be a spirit doll???
Old Sage: Spirit doll??
Spirit Doll: Hi Magnus. Nice to meet you.
Magnus: Nice to meet you too. Hey old man is this my weapon?
Old Sage: guess so!! and you are full of surprize.
Magnus: No way!! I though I will be getting some sort of cool weapon...
Magnus crying!!!!
Renga: Oh a spirit doll, thats a good weapon.
Magnus: What do you mean good? Dont try to pity me.
Old sage: Renga is right, it is a good weapon for you.
Spirit doll: Yea yea.
Old Sage: Trust me.
Fighting sound came from the entrence guild.
Old Sage, Magnus and the spirit doll rush out to see what had happen.
Old Sage: Switch on the siren, one of you. NOW!
One of the 1st rate warrior: Yes.
The warrior try to switch on the siren...
One of the 1st rate warrior: Sir the siren seems to be broken down...
Old Sage: What!! Now we cant contact the chief and vice chief commander. We have to depend on ourself.
Old sage look at Magnus
Old Sage: Magnus, use your spirit doll now, and see the power of the spirit doll yourself.
Magnus: How am I going to ativate it?
Spirit doll: Place your arm on my forehead, and focus your energy on that arm.
Magnus: Looks like I have no choice but to try.
Magnus focus his energy onto his right arm and place his right arm on the spirit doll forehead.
The spirit doll fuse into Magnus right arm.
Magnus right arm turn into a Divine Dragon sword.
Magnus: So this is the...
Old Sage: One of the Ultimate element sword , Divine Dragon Sword.
Old Sage: Come Magnus, lets rush to the guild entrence now, before its too late.
Magnus: OK!
Old Sage and Magnus rush to the entrence.
Morgen society member (1): Oh Oh, seems like our target is here..
Morgen society member (2): Magnus, come with us NOW!!!
Morgen Society member (1) start attacking together with the twin headed eagle on the Old Sage
While Morgen society member (2) launch his attack on Magnus.
Magnus use his sword to counter his attack..
Morgen society member (2): Seems like you has already gotten hold of the weapon from the element of Tian. So, I have no choice but to destory you!!
Magnus: Come on let's get this over WITH!!!
Will reinforcement be able to arrive on time, will Magnus able to win his first fight. See the next chapter, Chapter 7: The battle begins...
Old sage: Tiny brat, now I am going to teach you how to activate your weapon according to your element soul.
Magnus: Element Soul?
Old Sage: Yes, different type of people holds different type of weapon. Some people obtain a saber, but some people obtian dagger.
Magnus: Hmm... What will I obtain?
Old Sage: Dont know...
Magnus: I though An old sage knows everything.
Old Sage thinking: I also wonder what you might be getting...
Magnus imagin that he would obtain a ultra large sword or a ultimate strong axe...
Old Sage: Dont waste anymore time, let get started.
Magnus: OK! Hmmm where are we going now, not female domain again?
Old sage: Off course not, we are going to...
Weapon storage room.
Magnus: Why are we coming here for?
Old Sage: Magnus, give me a moment. I gona get you a weapon.
Old sage went in to the weapon storage room.
Magnus thinking: I though the type of weapon that I will be getting is depend on my element soul.... hmm why? Crap I still cant figure it out.
Old sage: Come on Magnus, come on in.
Magnus went into the weapon storage room, It was strongly guarded by 16 1st rate warrior under the command of the 1st cheif commander.
Old Sage: Come on Magnus, come over here.
Magnus went towards the old sage.
Old Sage: Tiny brat, hold onto this handle.
Magnus: Whats this handle for.
Old Sage: Oh Oh! This handle determins what kind/type of weapon you will be obtaining.
Magnus: Weird handle, can it really make the decision.
Handle: Are you supecting of my ability.
Magnus was shocked...
Magnus WAHHHHH!!!!!! A HANDLE CAN TALK WTH!!!!!
Old Sage Laugh: Hahaha.. Renga, you really made all the newcomer shocker when you first open your mouth.
Renga the handle: Ya I guess so.
Magnus: Are you a human?
Renga: No.
Magnus: You mean you are a ghost?!!!
Renga: Off course not.
Old Sage: Renga is a magical item that can determin whether a person is suitable of which kind of weapon. I am one of the creator of Renga.
Magnus: OH I see.
Old Sage: Dont waste any more time, Come on put your hands on the handle.
Magnus: OK!
Meanwhile, Alusian on the way back to his guild. 2 of the Morgen society member appear.
President from AlusMillieum: You 2 again. Last time I let you escape, but now I won't.
Morgen society Member (1): Relax, we came here not to start a fight, but to have a deal with you.
President from AlusMillieum: Deal?
Morgen society Member (2): Ya, all we wanted is...
President from AlusMillieum: What is it that you guys want?
Morgen society Member (2): Magnus' element of Tian.
President from AlusMillieum: NO WAY!
Morgen society Member (1): Seems like we have no choice... Lets go..
The Morgen society member summon the twin headed eagle and went off.
President from AlusMillieum: Where can they go? Oh no.
While Alusian calling his assistant...
Old Sage: Ok, it's going to appear.
Magnus: Come ON!! NOWW!!!!
A white light shone and it appear to be a spirit doll???
Old Sage: Spirit doll??
Spirit Doll: Hi Magnus. Nice to meet you.
Magnus: Nice to meet you too. Hey old man is this my weapon?
Old Sage: guess so!! and you are full of surprize.
Magnus: No way!! I though I will be getting some sort of cool weapon...
Magnus crying!!!!
Renga: Oh a spirit doll, thats a good weapon.
Magnus: What do you mean good? Dont try to pity me.
Old sage: Renga is right, it is a good weapon for you.
Spirit doll: Yea yea.
Old Sage: Trust me.
Fighting sound came from the entrence guild.
Old Sage, Magnus and the spirit doll rush out to see what had happen.
Old Sage: Switch on the siren, one of you. NOW!
One of the 1st rate warrior: Yes.
The warrior try to switch on the siren...
One of the 1st rate warrior: Sir the siren seems to be broken down...
Old Sage: What!! Now we cant contact the chief and vice chief commander. We have to depend on ourself.
Old sage look at Magnus
Old Sage: Magnus, use your spirit doll now, and see the power of the spirit doll yourself.
Magnus: How am I going to ativate it?
Spirit doll: Place your arm on my forehead, and focus your energy on that arm.
Magnus: Looks like I have no choice but to try.
Magnus focus his energy onto his right arm and place his right arm on the spirit doll forehead.
The spirit doll fuse into Magnus right arm.
Magnus right arm turn into a Divine Dragon sword.
Magnus: So this is the...
Old Sage: One of the Ultimate element sword , Divine Dragon Sword.
Old Sage: Come Magnus, lets rush to the guild entrence now, before its too late.
Magnus: OK!
Old Sage and Magnus rush to the entrence.
Morgen society member (1): Oh Oh, seems like our target is here..
Morgen society member (2): Magnus, come with us NOW!!!
Morgen Society member (1) start attacking together with the twin headed eagle on the Old Sage
While Morgen society member (2) launch his attack on Magnus.
Magnus use his sword to counter his attack..
Morgen society member (2): Seems like you has already gotten hold of the weapon from the element of Tian. So, I have no choice but to destory you!!
Magnus: Come on let's get this over WITH!!!
Will reinforcement be able to arrive on time, will Magnus able to win his first fight. See the next chapter, Chapter 7: The battle begins...
Sunday, February 11, 2007
Chapter 5
Chapter 5: Training BEGIN!!
Old sage: Magnus lets go for some training.
Magnus: OK!
Old sage brings Magnus to the female domain. Outside the door sign “Forbidden for male especially old pervert!!!”
Old sage: This place will be your first training ground.
Magnus: Female domain???
Old sage: Yeah!
Magnus: But it’s forbidden for male….
Old Sage: Come on, let’s go in and check it out. Being curious is part of the training. Your president also went through this kind of training…
Magnus: REALLY!!! That will be awesome.
President from AlusMillieum: I wonder is it safe for Magnus being train under the old man. Hope he won’t do that stupid training to Magnus…
Old Sage and Magnus were peeping at girls, and a sudden shout came out from the bathroom…
Old Sage: Run Magnus, if you not want to get yourself killed.
Magnus: What!!! Don’t you have any cloaking technique? Or Hypnotize technique?
Old Sage: If I have, I won’t need to run. Quick run before you DIE!!!
Magnus: What kind of training is this…? AHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Old sage and Magnus were chase by a bunch of female warrior holding knife and sword running around the east domain.
Old sage: Follow me, I know a place that would be safe for us.
Magnus: ok!
Magnus thinking: Is this what president do for his training?
Old sage: Tiny brat, are you thinking that is that what president does for his training? Right?
Magnus: Wah this old man really knows everything.
Old sage: Once you become a Sage, you can read peoples thoughts.
Magnus: IS IT?
Old sage: Old sage never lies.
Reach the top of the building.
Old sage: Here we go…
Old sage jumped across the building… is 100m apart between the building.
Magnus: That old man is awesome. Hey old man what about me? Thinking of leaving me here alone and take all the responsibility?
Old Sage: Come on over. It’s easy.
Magnus: OMG!! You asking me to jump. NO WAY!!!! I will not jump. Under my dead body.
Old sage: You better jump if not your reputation in this guild will be pretty bad. Girls will say “oh what kind of the pervert boy is that, first day of entering the guild and do this kind of dirty work”. So for that no girl will want you for the rest of your life.
Magnus: REST OF MY LIFE!!!!!!
Old sage: Oh! The girls are rushing up.
Old sage thinking: I wonder if the legend is true about the angelic wing appear from the element of Tian.
Magnus was shivering. Try to come up with his own conclusion, Jump or being name as pervert for the rest of his life.
Magnus: OK! Seems no choice for me… Here I come.
Magnus jump but…
Magnus: AHHHHHHHHH!!!! I can’t make it.
Magnus praying: No god I don’t want to die so early, I want to play more games, have girlfriend and have my own family… I DON’T WANA DIE NOW!!!!
Old Sage was eagerly watching at Magnus to see if the angelic wing will be activate.
75m to ground. Magnus element power suddenly activate on his right hand. The word Tian in Chinese appears on his right hand. And a pair of wing appears on Magnus’ back.
Old sage: No, that’s not the angelic wing. That is…
Meanwhile, the president meeting.
Head Sage (Leader of the 26 sage): We have terrible news, as you know dark society has begun to take action. And it seems to be interested in knowing the strength of the new recruits that just been recruit from the recent guild event.
President from PlikaMillieum: WHAT? If that’s the case, those dark society members should have appear in my guild. But I didn’t see them nor sense their present.
President from ZanMillieum, BriMillieum, CaseoMillieum, FretMillieum, KaliMeiilieum, NelimosMillieum, VlikaMillieum, SertagMillieum: Ya why didnt they come to investigate our recurits?
Head Sage: So that means only AlusMillieum being targeted by the dark society.
President from ZanMillieum: Besides that, which association from the dark society that attack AlusMillieum?
Head Sage: From the description that Alusian told me, I confirm is Morgen Society.
President from NelimosMillieum: Ohhh Morgen Society, Alusian didn’t one of your BEST friend is in that association too?
Alusian went silent.
President from SertagMillieum: Please don’t talk about unnecessary things in this meeting.
President from NelimosMillieum: Oh sorry! I didn’t meant to, it just slip off my mouth, I just can’t control it.
Head Sage: I am here to announce that we are going to activate the first level of warning system. Guild presidents, make sure to do what you need to do for the first level warning exercise.
10 President from the 10 guild: Yes!
Head Sage: Dismissed…
All the 10 president went back to their guild.
Old Sage: WHAT!! NO way he could achieve that with his current level.
Old Sage: Holy saint Wing.
Magnus fly towards the old sage.
Old sage was stunned for a moment.
Old sage: That was a nice skill.
Magnus: That was awesome, but we need to run. Quick…
Magnus drag the old sage and run to a safer place to avoid being notice by those female warrior.
They reached the west domain…
Magnus: ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME!!! I ALMOST DIE…
Old Sage: congrats, you have obtained the Holy Saint Wings.
Magnus: Holy Saint Wings?
Old Sage: Ya, the wings that save you. It’s activated from your element, Tian.
Magnus: WOW, Awesome.
Old sage: I thought you will be obtaining…
Magnus: Yes?
Old sage: Nothing.
Old sage: Now let’s start with our second stage of training… This kid seems to be stronger than his looks. Maybe stronger than Alusian if he train harder.
Magnus: Yeah! Come on old man stop standing there. Let’s start the second training!!
Magnus appear to be strong but how strong can it go. Why Alsuain best friend enter the Morgen society? See the next chapter: Chapter 6: The true power of Tian.
Old sage: Magnus lets go for some training.
Magnus: OK!
Old sage brings Magnus to the female domain. Outside the door sign “Forbidden for male especially old pervert!!!”
Old sage: This place will be your first training ground.
Magnus: Female domain???
Old sage: Yeah!
Magnus: But it’s forbidden for male….
Old Sage: Come on, let’s go in and check it out. Being curious is part of the training. Your president also went through this kind of training…
Magnus: REALLY!!! That will be awesome.
President from AlusMillieum: I wonder is it safe for Magnus being train under the old man. Hope he won’t do that stupid training to Magnus…
Old Sage and Magnus were peeping at girls, and a sudden shout came out from the bathroom…
Old Sage: Run Magnus, if you not want to get yourself killed.
Magnus: What!!! Don’t you have any cloaking technique? Or Hypnotize technique?
Old Sage: If I have, I won’t need to run. Quick run before you DIE!!!
Magnus: What kind of training is this…? AHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Old sage and Magnus were chase by a bunch of female warrior holding knife and sword running around the east domain.
Old sage: Follow me, I know a place that would be safe for us.
Magnus: ok!
Magnus thinking: Is this what president do for his training?
Old sage: Tiny brat, are you thinking that is that what president does for his training? Right?
Magnus: Wah this old man really knows everything.
Old sage: Once you become a Sage, you can read peoples thoughts.
Magnus: IS IT?
Old sage: Old sage never lies.
Reach the top of the building.
Old sage: Here we go…
Old sage jumped across the building… is 100m apart between the building.
Magnus: That old man is awesome. Hey old man what about me? Thinking of leaving me here alone and take all the responsibility?
Old Sage: Come on over. It’s easy.
Magnus: OMG!! You asking me to jump. NO WAY!!!! I will not jump. Under my dead body.
Old sage: You better jump if not your reputation in this guild will be pretty bad. Girls will say “oh what kind of the pervert boy is that, first day of entering the guild and do this kind of dirty work”. So for that no girl will want you for the rest of your life.
Magnus: REST OF MY LIFE!!!!!!
Old sage: Oh! The girls are rushing up.
Old sage thinking: I wonder if the legend is true about the angelic wing appear from the element of Tian.
Magnus was shivering. Try to come up with his own conclusion, Jump or being name as pervert for the rest of his life.
Magnus: OK! Seems no choice for me… Here I come.
Magnus jump but…
Magnus: AHHHHHHHHH!!!! I can’t make it.
Magnus praying: No god I don’t want to die so early, I want to play more games, have girlfriend and have my own family… I DON’T WANA DIE NOW!!!!
Old Sage was eagerly watching at Magnus to see if the angelic wing will be activate.
75m to ground. Magnus element power suddenly activate on his right hand. The word Tian in Chinese appears on his right hand. And a pair of wing appears on Magnus’ back.
Old sage: No, that’s not the angelic wing. That is…
Meanwhile, the president meeting.
Head Sage (Leader of the 26 sage): We have terrible news, as you know dark society has begun to take action. And it seems to be interested in knowing the strength of the new recruits that just been recruit from the recent guild event.
President from PlikaMillieum: WHAT? If that’s the case, those dark society members should have appear in my guild. But I didn’t see them nor sense their present.
President from ZanMillieum, BriMillieum, CaseoMillieum, FretMillieum, KaliMeiilieum, NelimosMillieum, VlikaMillieum, SertagMillieum: Ya why didnt they come to investigate our recurits?
Head Sage: So that means only AlusMillieum being targeted by the dark society.
President from ZanMillieum: Besides that, which association from the dark society that attack AlusMillieum?
Head Sage: From the description that Alusian told me, I confirm is Morgen Society.
President from NelimosMillieum: Ohhh Morgen Society, Alusian didn’t one of your BEST friend is in that association too?
Alusian went silent.
President from SertagMillieum: Please don’t talk about unnecessary things in this meeting.
President from NelimosMillieum: Oh sorry! I didn’t meant to, it just slip off my mouth, I just can’t control it.
Head Sage: I am here to announce that we are going to activate the first level of warning system. Guild presidents, make sure to do what you need to do for the first level warning exercise.
10 President from the 10 guild: Yes!
Head Sage: Dismissed…
All the 10 president went back to their guild.
Old Sage: WHAT!! NO way he could achieve that with his current level.
Old Sage: Holy saint Wing.
Magnus fly towards the old sage.
Old sage was stunned for a moment.
Old sage: That was a nice skill.
Magnus: That was awesome, but we need to run. Quick…
Magnus drag the old sage and run to a safer place to avoid being notice by those female warrior.
They reached the west domain…
Magnus: ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME!!! I ALMOST DIE…
Old Sage: congrats, you have obtained the Holy Saint Wings.
Magnus: Holy Saint Wings?
Old Sage: Ya, the wings that save you. It’s activated from your element, Tian.
Magnus: WOW, Awesome.
Old sage: I thought you will be obtaining…
Magnus: Yes?
Old sage: Nothing.
Old sage: Now let’s start with our second stage of training… This kid seems to be stronger than his looks. Maybe stronger than Alusian if he train harder.
Magnus: Yeah! Come on old man stop standing there. Let’s start the second training!!
Magnus appear to be strong but how strong can it go. Why Alsuain best friend enter the Morgen society? See the next chapter: Chapter 6: The true power of Tian.
Saturday, February 10, 2007
chapter 4
Chapter 4: Emergency! Dark Society appears!!
Guild castle of AlusMillieum
President from AlusMillieum: Left assistant bring all the other recruits to their respective domain and Right assistant call all the chief commander for a short meeting at the north domain.
Left and Right assistant: Yes president.
President from Alusmillieum: Magnus, from today onwards I will train you by myself and to see how far you can really go in the future in my guild. So training for these 10 days will be extremely tough.
Magnus: Yes president.
An old sage walking towards the Alusian and Magnus.
Old sage: Hi little brat oh with another tiny brat.
Magnus: Whose that?
President from Alusmillieum: Old man is you. Did you happen to drop by to see who I have recruited?
Old sage: Nono. I have no time for that. I am here because …. Hmmm let me think … Why do I come here for?
Magnus: Old man, little brat? Is that old man the previous president of this guild?
President from Alusmillieum: You are right. How did you know?
Magnus: That’s because you guys are having the same hairstyle.
Alusian knock on Magnus head…
President from Alusmillieum: IT’S NOT THE SAME. MY HAIR IS MORE SPIKER THAN HIS…
Magnus: I though is the same…
President from Alusmillieum: Say that again MAGNUS!!!!!
Magnus: Sorry!!!
Old sage: hahaha same kind of personality when you first join this guild Alusian… This really brings back memory.
President from Alusmillieum: Straight to the topic. Old man why did you come here for?
Old sage: Oh ya, here you go. A letter from the secret agent.
President from Alusmillieum: What is inside this letter?
Old sage: see for yourself.
Alusian open the letter and read…
President from Alusmillieum: This is…. SERIOUS. And you old man still remain so calm.
Magnus: What’s serious?
President from Alusmillieum: Dark society has begun to attack the south city of pleasome.
Old sage was looking at the new recruit.
Old sage: seems like more guys than girls… Not fun…
President from Alusmillieum: YOU STILL HAVE TIME FOR THIS KIND OF PERVERTED STUFF!!!!!!
President from Alusmillieum: Sorry Magnus, I have to go for the president meeting….
BOOM!!! Explosion from the entrance of the guild…
Alusian, old sage and Magnus ran towards the entrance.
President from Alusmillieum: Who the hell are you?
Dark society member (1): Don’t be so rude to people, after all I am one of your guest.
President from Alusmillieum: One of your guests. Magnus…
Alusian push Magnus away as another dark society member try to attack Magnus from the back… And the guy landed beside his own member…
Dark society member (2): Looks like I have missed him.
While the dark society member (2) is copying Magnus data…
President from Alusmillieum: What are you guys coming here for? Never mind. This is over… I will catch you with my own hand…
Dark society member (2): Done!
Dark society member (1): Seems like our job is done. Bye bye…
Dark society member 1 and 2 when off by their own summoning Twin head eagle.
President from Alusmillieum: Damm I have miss them… But what is their purpose of coming to my guild…
Old sage: To get Magnus data.
President from Alusmillieum: Get Magnus data?
Magnus: My data?
Old sage: Its pretty obvious that the dark society is interested in Magnus right now as he possess the ultimate rare advance element, Tian. Oh little brat don’t you have a meeting to attend?
President from Alusmillieum: Ya I almost forgot.
Magnus: What about me?
President from Alusmillieum: hmm, just nice. Old man can you help me with this boy, prepare him for the upcoming task for the guild event?
Old sage: Sure, this will be interesting…
Alusian called his assistant to cancel the chief commander meeting and left to the headquarter.
What will the training like with the old sage and what is the dark society real motive aside getting information about Magnus. See the next Chapter. Chapter 5: Training BEGIN!!
Guild castle of AlusMillieum
President from AlusMillieum: Left assistant bring all the other recruits to their respective domain and Right assistant call all the chief commander for a short meeting at the north domain.
Left and Right assistant: Yes president.
President from Alusmillieum: Magnus, from today onwards I will train you by myself and to see how far you can really go in the future in my guild. So training for these 10 days will be extremely tough.
Magnus: Yes president.
An old sage walking towards the Alusian and Magnus.
Old sage: Hi little brat oh with another tiny brat.
Magnus: Whose that?
President from Alusmillieum: Old man is you. Did you happen to drop by to see who I have recruited?
Old sage: Nono. I have no time for that. I am here because …. Hmmm let me think … Why do I come here for?
Magnus: Old man, little brat? Is that old man the previous president of this guild?
President from Alusmillieum: You are right. How did you know?
Magnus: That’s because you guys are having the same hairstyle.
Alusian knock on Magnus head…
President from Alusmillieum: IT’S NOT THE SAME. MY HAIR IS MORE SPIKER THAN HIS…
Magnus: I though is the same…
President from Alusmillieum: Say that again MAGNUS!!!!!
Magnus: Sorry!!!
Old sage: hahaha same kind of personality when you first join this guild Alusian… This really brings back memory.
President from Alusmillieum: Straight to the topic. Old man why did you come here for?
Old sage: Oh ya, here you go. A letter from the secret agent.
President from Alusmillieum: What is inside this letter?
Old sage: see for yourself.
Alusian open the letter and read…
President from Alusmillieum: This is…. SERIOUS. And you old man still remain so calm.
Magnus: What’s serious?
President from Alusmillieum: Dark society has begun to attack the south city of pleasome.
Old sage was looking at the new recruit.
Old sage: seems like more guys than girls… Not fun…
President from Alusmillieum: YOU STILL HAVE TIME FOR THIS KIND OF PERVERTED STUFF!!!!!!
President from Alusmillieum: Sorry Magnus, I have to go for the president meeting….
BOOM!!! Explosion from the entrance of the guild…
Alusian, old sage and Magnus ran towards the entrance.
President from Alusmillieum: Who the hell are you?
Dark society member (1): Don’t be so rude to people, after all I am one of your guest.
President from Alusmillieum: One of your guests. Magnus…
Alusian push Magnus away as another dark society member try to attack Magnus from the back… And the guy landed beside his own member…
Dark society member (2): Looks like I have missed him.
While the dark society member (2) is copying Magnus data…
President from Alusmillieum: What are you guys coming here for? Never mind. This is over… I will catch you with my own hand…
Dark society member (2): Done!
Dark society member (1): Seems like our job is done. Bye bye…
Dark society member 1 and 2 when off by their own summoning Twin head eagle.
President from Alusmillieum: Damm I have miss them… But what is their purpose of coming to my guild…
Old sage: To get Magnus data.
President from Alusmillieum: Get Magnus data?
Magnus: My data?
Old sage: Its pretty obvious that the dark society is interested in Magnus right now as he possess the ultimate rare advance element, Tian. Oh little brat don’t you have a meeting to attend?
President from Alusmillieum: Ya I almost forgot.
Magnus: What about me?
President from Alusmillieum: hmm, just nice. Old man can you help me with this boy, prepare him for the upcoming task for the guild event?
Old sage: Sure, this will be interesting…
Alusian called his assistant to cancel the chief commander meeting and left to the headquarter.
What will the training like with the old sage and what is the dark society real motive aside getting information about Magnus. See the next Chapter. Chapter 5: Training BEGIN!!
Friday, February 9, 2007
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chapter 3
Chapter 3: Begin with the Ten days training!
President from AlusMillieum: You possess an ADVANCE ELEMENT!!!
Magnus: Advance element?? Whats that?
President from AlusMillieum: In the element ranking system, we have grouped them into various types of group.
First is basic element normally for student at the age like you to have. There are 5 of them: Fire, Water, Ground(Di), Wind and lightning. These are the five.
Secondly for an advance element this is 10 times more powerful then basic element. There are also 5 of them: Tian, Gold, Earth, Demon, Steel
Thirdly is Summoning element. This is a high level skill element warrior can achieve. Some of the element warrior may not even achieve this kind of summoning due to their elements combination. This I will explain to you later on when I got time.
Last and the most powerful technique is the fusion technique. If you can achieve this technique, you will be the same level as the president of every guild…
Magnus: Wow, that’s awesome.
Announcer: President from the 10 guild please come forward and chose the students for your guild…
President from AlusMillieum: sorry Magnus I need to go to the stage now for the student selection, hmm please follow my assistant as you are now a warrior from my guild…
Magnus: OK!
All the presidents are standing on the stage.
Announcer: Let the selection BEGIN!
Cheer from the spectators
All the president are now seriously choosing their recruits
After 20 min of selection
Announcer: OK! The selection of the new recruits has ended.
Announcer: Now all the student that has been selected by the presidents please stand behind the president that chose you and form a single row.
Students all forming rows behind the president that chose them.
Announcer: Now, we will let the president from each guild announce their warrior representative for the upcoming task! Let us start with the previous champion, ZanMillieum.
ZanMillieum: Fret who has a basic element of water. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
FretMillieum: Korala who has a basic element of water. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
PlikaMillieum: TCS who has a basic element of Fire. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
Magnus: Wow TCS got himself a nasty president.
BriMillieum: Zanrok who has a basic element of Wind. Consider him as 2nd rate fighter.
CaseoMillieum: Olisop who has 1 basic element1 of ground. Consider him as 2nd rate fighter.
SertagMillieum: Justin who has a basic element of lightning. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
VlikaMillieum : TTL who has a basic element of wind. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
NelimosMillieum: Lucius who has a basic element of fire. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
KaliMeiilieum: Mirgin who has a basic element of lightning. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
Announcer: Now let AlusMillieum announce his recruit for the upcoming task…
President from AlusMillieum: Come down Magnus.
Magnus ran towards the stage.
AlusMillieum: Magnus who has an advance element of Tian. Consider him as a 3rd rate warrior.
Announer: Wow a 3rd rate warrior from the guild AlusMillieum.
President from PlikaMillieum: That’s not fair. He is not one of the chosen ones and you may fake it that he have the element of Tian. It’s IMPOSSIBLE.
President from NelimosMillieum: But it’s true. That guy really has the element of Tian. Alusian was clever by hiding the talented guy for himself.
President from AlusMillieum: Aren’t you guys doing the same thing. Suppressing the element power to its lowest to those who have the high potential to become a chief commander.
President from PlikaMillieum: Ok that makes it a draw. So let us start with the training session.
Announcer: Ok let start with the next task training. Duration 10 days!
All the president: OK! Let’s go.
The president along with their assistant and the selected recruits gone off to their own guild castle.
Announcer: That’s all for today, the next task will be 10 days later and the place will be here. Cya then.
President from AlusMillieum: You possess an ADVANCE ELEMENT!!!
Magnus: Advance element?? Whats that?
President from AlusMillieum: In the element ranking system, we have grouped them into various types of group.
First is basic element normally for student at the age like you to have. There are 5 of them: Fire, Water, Ground(Di), Wind and lightning. These are the five.
Secondly for an advance element this is 10 times more powerful then basic element. There are also 5 of them: Tian, Gold, Earth, Demon, Steel
Thirdly is Summoning element. This is a high level skill element warrior can achieve. Some of the element warrior may not even achieve this kind of summoning due to their elements combination. This I will explain to you later on when I got time.
Last and the most powerful technique is the fusion technique. If you can achieve this technique, you will be the same level as the president of every guild…
Magnus: Wow, that’s awesome.
Announcer: President from the 10 guild please come forward and chose the students for your guild…
President from AlusMillieum: sorry Magnus I need to go to the stage now for the student selection, hmm please follow my assistant as you are now a warrior from my guild…
Magnus: OK!
All the presidents are standing on the stage.
Announcer: Let the selection BEGIN!
Cheer from the spectators
All the president are now seriously choosing their recruits
After 20 min of selection
Announcer: OK! The selection of the new recruits has ended.
Announcer: Now all the student that has been selected by the presidents please stand behind the president that chose you and form a single row.
Students all forming rows behind the president that chose them.
Announcer: Now, we will let the president from each guild announce their warrior representative for the upcoming task! Let us start with the previous champion, ZanMillieum.
ZanMillieum: Fret who has a basic element of water. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
FretMillieum: Korala who has a basic element of water. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
PlikaMillieum: TCS who has a basic element of Fire. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
Magnus: Wow TCS got himself a nasty president.
BriMillieum: Zanrok who has a basic element of Wind. Consider him as 2nd rate fighter.
CaseoMillieum: Olisop who has 1 basic element1 of ground. Consider him as 2nd rate fighter.
SertagMillieum: Justin who has a basic element of lightning. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
VlikaMillieum : TTL who has a basic element of wind. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
NelimosMillieum: Lucius who has a basic element of fire. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
KaliMeiilieum: Mirgin who has a basic element of lightning. Consider him as a 2nd rate fighter.
Announcer: Now let AlusMillieum announce his recruit for the upcoming task…
President from AlusMillieum: Come down Magnus.
Magnus ran towards the stage.
AlusMillieum: Magnus who has an advance element of Tian. Consider him as a 3rd rate warrior.
Announer: Wow a 3rd rate warrior from the guild AlusMillieum.
President from PlikaMillieum: That’s not fair. He is not one of the chosen ones and you may fake it that he have the element of Tian. It’s IMPOSSIBLE.
President from NelimosMillieum: But it’s true. That guy really has the element of Tian. Alusian was clever by hiding the talented guy for himself.
President from AlusMillieum: Aren’t you guys doing the same thing. Suppressing the element power to its lowest to those who have the high potential to become a chief commander.
President from PlikaMillieum: Ok that makes it a draw. So let us start with the training session.
Announcer: Ok let start with the next task training. Duration 10 days!
All the president: OK! Let’s go.
The president along with their assistant and the selected recruits gone off to their own guild castle.
Announcer: That’s all for today, the next task will be 10 days later and the place will be here. Cya then.
chapter 1
Chapter 1: Destiny begin
Monday morning
Magnus: Oh no!! Going to late for school. Mum I will skip my breakfast if not I will be catch by discipline master.
Magnus’ Mum: Are you sure? If you didn’t eat breakfast, you will have no strength to concentrate on your study…
Magnus: Never mind, it’s ok. There’s nothing to concentrate in school anyway. I have finished the studying entire subject that is needed for O level.
Magnus’ Mum: Don’t forget to close the door.
Magnus: OK!!
Running on the street…….
School bell rang….Ding Dong Ding Dong
Magnus: Crap! Now I have only one way to survive…
Magnus is cursing his discipline master...
Magnus: Please god please let my discipline master met an accident or his pet dog die and apply for leave for today!!!! PLEASE!!!!
Discipline master: OIIIII!!!!!!!!! What’s with that cursing…? Curse me is alright BUT NOT MY CUTTIE LITTLE PET DOG.
Discipline master is thinking about his cute little pet dog...
Discipline master: Back to the original matter, I know its alright for you to miss lesson, but school rule is the thing that you must obey….
Discipline master continue nagging...
Magnus mumbling: How can I not be late, Apprentice always ends late (Apprentice is a television show). If you could ask the mediacrop…
Discipline master: HEY!!!! ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME!!!
Principle walks towards Magnus and Discipline master.
Principle: STOP!!! Discipline master, I have a matter to discuss with you.
Discipline master: Ok. Magnus I will deal with you later.
Magnus was jumping for joy while he is walking back to his classroom.
Magnus: Yay I manage to run away from the demon once again. The hero will never LOSE!!! HAHAHAHA!!!
Discipline master was angrily stare at Magnus before enter principle office.
Discipline master: OI! I heard THAT!!!
Magnus stun for a few second and quickly ran off to class.
11.59am, 1 min to lunch break.
TCS: Alright, 1 more bloody minute.
Magnus, Justin, TTL: YEAH!!!
The 4 of them were power up with fire….
5 minutes later.
TTL: Why the time hasn’t arrive yet…
Tracy: It’s already 12.04. And the clock has run out of battery. LOL
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: OMG, we have missed the crucial moment.
When they reach the canteen.
Magnus: OH NOOO!!! Fried chicken from the Malay store has sold out…
The 4 of them looks like their spirit had sucked away…
Discipline master: Oi, the four of you don’t be sad. Come to my office. I have something to give you…
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin thinking that the discipline master will give them the most popular, tastiest FRIED FISH…
When entering the office…
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: What is this?! Sight. Full of disappointment.
Discipline master: This is the entrance card for tomorrow guild event…
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: GUILD EVENT!!!!?????
Discipline master: YES! The guild event which held every 5 years. Let me explain…. A guild is a place for student who possesses the power of the element to join. In this guild event, the president of each guild will choose students to their guild in this event. The guild event also gathers the entire 10 guilds together and competes with each other with the student that they have chosen during the event and train them within the time limit. Normally 10 days. So to see the difference in their training method. Also, there are over 1000 schools of age 13 years old student will be attending this event too…
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: hmm I thought this event only for the express student and why us?
Discipline master: Although this is for the express student but the four of you, I highly recommended the four of you to attend this event…
Next day, the guild event at the national stadium…
TTL: To sweep the FLOOR!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Discipline master: Yes finally have my revenge… yahooooo
The discipline master was jumping for joy.
3 hour later.
Announcer: Let’s begin the prestigious event which held every 5 years. Oh, the first guild has arrived… Let’s see which guild is it….
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin were betting on which guild will arrive first.
Magnus: AluMillieum
TCS: BriMillieum
TTL: CaseoMillieum
Justin: Hope none of these 3. (Cause Justin was the banker)
Praying……
Announcer: Oh the first guild that arrives is…..
Pray ten times harder….
Magnus: AluMillieum AluMillieum AluMillieum AluMillieum
TCS: BriMillieum BriMillieum BriMillieum BriMillieum
TTL: CaseoMillieum CaseoMillieum CaseoMillieum CaseoMillieum
Justin: None of those 3 PLEASE!!!!
Announcer: PlikaMillieum…
Justin: YESSSSSS, I won. 1 week of Macdonals yahoooo…
PlikaMillieum president walked passes the 4 of them, and stare at them for a moment and walked away…
The four of them were scared as the president of the PlikaMillieum is one of the vicious president that you never wanted to see.
What will the president thinking, will the president spilt out to their discipline master that they are gambling…
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: Better NOT!!!
See the next chapter on the Element Destiny. The gathering of the 10 guilds
Monday morning
Magnus: Oh no!! Going to late for school. Mum I will skip my breakfast if not I will be catch by discipline master.
Magnus’ Mum: Are you sure? If you didn’t eat breakfast, you will have no strength to concentrate on your study…
Magnus: Never mind, it’s ok. There’s nothing to concentrate in school anyway. I have finished the studying entire subject that is needed for O level.
Magnus’ Mum: Don’t forget to close the door.
Magnus: OK!!
Running on the street…….
School bell rang….Ding Dong Ding Dong
Magnus: Crap! Now I have only one way to survive…
Magnus is cursing his discipline master...
Magnus: Please god please let my discipline master met an accident or his pet dog die and apply for leave for today!!!! PLEASE!!!!
Discipline master: OIIIII!!!!!!!!! What’s with that cursing…? Curse me is alright BUT NOT MY CUTTIE LITTLE PET DOG.
Discipline master is thinking about his cute little pet dog...
Discipline master: Back to the original matter, I know its alright for you to miss lesson, but school rule is the thing that you must obey….
Discipline master continue nagging...
Magnus mumbling: How can I not be late, Apprentice always ends late (Apprentice is a television show). If you could ask the mediacrop…
Discipline master: HEY!!!! ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME!!!
Principle walks towards Magnus and Discipline master.
Principle: STOP!!! Discipline master, I have a matter to discuss with you.
Discipline master: Ok. Magnus I will deal with you later.
Magnus was jumping for joy while he is walking back to his classroom.
Magnus: Yay I manage to run away from the demon once again. The hero will never LOSE!!! HAHAHAHA!!!
Discipline master was angrily stare at Magnus before enter principle office.
Discipline master: OI! I heard THAT!!!
Magnus stun for a few second and quickly ran off to class.
11.59am, 1 min to lunch break.
TCS: Alright, 1 more bloody minute.
Magnus, Justin, TTL: YEAH!!!
The 4 of them were power up with fire….
5 minutes later.
TTL: Why the time hasn’t arrive yet…
Tracy: It’s already 12.04. And the clock has run out of battery. LOL
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: OMG, we have missed the crucial moment.
When they reach the canteen.
Magnus: OH NOOO!!! Fried chicken from the Malay store has sold out…
The 4 of them looks like their spirit had sucked away…
Discipline master: Oi, the four of you don’t be sad. Come to my office. I have something to give you…
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin thinking that the discipline master will give them the most popular, tastiest FRIED FISH…
When entering the office…
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: What is this?! Sight. Full of disappointment.
Discipline master: This is the entrance card for tomorrow guild event…
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: GUILD EVENT!!!!?????
Discipline master: YES! The guild event which held every 5 years. Let me explain…. A guild is a place for student who possesses the power of the element to join. In this guild event, the president of each guild will choose students to their guild in this event. The guild event also gathers the entire 10 guilds together and competes with each other with the student that they have chosen during the event and train them within the time limit. Normally 10 days. So to see the difference in their training method. Also, there are over 1000 schools of age 13 years old student will be attending this event too…
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: hmm I thought this event only for the express student and why us?
Discipline master: Although this is for the express student but the four of you, I highly recommended the four of you to attend this event…
Next day, the guild event at the national stadium…
TTL: To sweep the FLOOR!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Discipline master: Yes finally have my revenge… yahooooo
The discipline master was jumping for joy.
3 hour later.
Announcer: Let’s begin the prestigious event which held every 5 years. Oh, the first guild has arrived… Let’s see which guild is it….
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin were betting on which guild will arrive first.
Magnus: AluMillieum
TCS: BriMillieum
TTL: CaseoMillieum
Justin: Hope none of these 3. (Cause Justin was the banker)
Praying……
Announcer: Oh the first guild that arrives is…..
Pray ten times harder….
Magnus: AluMillieum AluMillieum AluMillieum AluMillieum
TCS: BriMillieum BriMillieum BriMillieum BriMillieum
TTL: CaseoMillieum CaseoMillieum CaseoMillieum CaseoMillieum
Justin: None of those 3 PLEASE!!!!
Announcer: PlikaMillieum…
Justin: YESSSSSS, I won. 1 week of Macdonals yahoooo…
PlikaMillieum president walked passes the 4 of them, and stare at them for a moment and walked away…
The four of them were scared as the president of the PlikaMillieum is one of the vicious president that you never wanted to see.
What will the president thinking, will the president spilt out to their discipline master that they are gambling…
Magnus, TCS, TTL and Justin: Better NOT!!!
See the next chapter on the Element Destiny. The gathering of the 10 guilds
chapter 2
Chapter 2: The gathering of the 10 guilds
The other 9 guild are entering the stadium orderly ZanMillieum, AlusMillieum, BriMillieum, CaseoMillieum, FretMillieum, KaliMeiilieum, NelimosMillieum, VlikaMillieum and SertagMillieum
Magnus thinking: AlusMillieum is cool… I can see that many other students are aiming for ZanMillieum.
TTL: Magnus what you thinking? Thinking of entering a guild. Not a chance.
Firstly, we are not express student and…..
Justin: Hang on! According to the event, Those student who attend this event may have a chance to be selected by the left and right assistant of each guild.
TCS: But why? I am still confuse, as the principle as announce that only express student can enter this kind of event.
Principle: That’s because you guys are talented…
Magnus, TTL, TCS, Justin: TALENTED???? WE?? HAHAHA
Principle: Ya. I AM SERIOUS.
The four of them were shocked.
Principle: I have seen your record and your exam paper. You guys did badly is because… YOU GUYS ARE LAZY TO FINISH THE EXAM PAPER.
You all only write until where you think, no is confirm that you will get a mere 50 marks. So I recommend your discipline master to let the four of you enter the event.
Magnus: if we are chosen to enter this event for the selection, then WHY THE HELL DID THE DISCIPLINE MASTER MADE US SWEEP THE FLOOR!!!!!
Principle: Hmm for that case, you will have to ask the discipline master yourself. But please get to your seat first according to the number on the entrance card.
The four of them are finding their seats.
Magnus: seat number 890101
TCS: seat number 890102
TTL: seat number 890103
Justin: seat number 890104
On the meantime,
President from BriMillieum: Long time no see, Alusian (president from AlusMillieum) heard that you are not really interested in this kind of event..
President from AlusMillieum: This kind of event doesn’t bring any talented student.
President from FretMillieum walk towards the 2 president.
President from FretMillieum: Nono, There are quite a lot of talented student this time. Unlike the previous guild event, none of us get a decent amount of recruits. I am also quite sure this guild event would be fun too.
President from PlikaMillieum: Off course. This time I will become the top guild rather than third. That old guy (President from ZanMillieum) and you Fretsoe will be defeated by me. (Evil smile)
President from FretMillieum: woot not friendly I guess, hope to get a nice fight from you.
President from AlusMillieum was looking around, he sense one strong element but he couldn’t find where it appear from and from which guy.
President from SertagMillieum: Hey Alusian, This time aren’t you chicken out again, giving up like this isn’t a great man would do… hahahaha
President from AlusMillieum: Excuse me, I need to go to the washroom.
President from SertagMillieum: His attitude again… sighs
President from AlusMillieum followed by his left and right assistant, walked pass Magnus and his gang where they are find their seats. He suddenly stopped. He sense an element came out from Magnus.
President from AlusMillieum: Hey, that guy over there. Whats your name?
Magnus: Me?
President from AlusMillieum: Ya, You.
Magnus: Magnus
President from AlusMillieum: What a weird name. See you later…
Justin: Wow, AlusMillieum president talk to you man.
TTL: There’s our seat.
TCS: WTH!!! Last 4 seats….
Magnus: We are being ill treated. OH NO
Announcer: Ladies and gentlemen, let us start on the selection by the 10 guild assistant.
The guild assistants quickly do their first elimination on those who possess the element power.
After the assistants finish selecting the student…
Announcer: Ok! Those who have a sticker on their shoulder please come forward.
Justin: Woot I have yay I have been selected.
TTL, TCS: Me too. Magnus what about you?
Magnus: I have been eliminated. I didn’t not possess the element power. SO good luck to you guys…
Even though Magnus seems to be happy on the surface but he was crying like hell in his heart.
All the selected students are going onto the stage.
President from NelimosMillieum: Wow, Nice number 360 student have possess the element power. But I think some of them only possess the container for the element power.
Container for the element power means People who are able to have an element power but need a certain period of time like, a month, a year or a lifetime to get it.
President from NelimosMillieum: This is getting more exciting.
Left assistant from NelimosMillieum: Sir, I have detected a strange element power.
President from NelimosMillieum: WHERE!!! Which guy has it?
Left assistant from NelimosMillieum: Sorry sir, I was unable to know who possess it.
President from NelimosMillieum: You fool! Search for it right now…
President from AlusMillieum: There’s no need for a search, That guy, I have recruit him.
President from NelimosMillieum: Oh, Alusian. Didn’t you forget the rule, we have to select the student at the same time.
President from AlusMillieum: Ya I know. But it applies to those who are on the stage right now.
President from NelimosMillieum: Oh I see, so I have no choice but to let you have it. By the way where is that boy that you have recruited?
President from AlusMillieum: Magnus!! Come here right now!
Magnus was shocked and didn’t know what had happen, but to rush over to the president from AlusMillieum.
President from AlusMillieum: This is the guy that I recruited.
President from NelimosMillieum: So is you. When did you find him?
President from AlusMillieum: I am not obligated to let you know. Sorry if you would excuse me, I need to have a word with this boy.
President from NelimosMillieum: Damm Alusian, You are cunning ones.
Alusian bring Magnus outside the stadium.
President from AlusMillieum: Magnus, I have officially recruited you to my guild.
Magnus: WHAT!!!!!
President from AlusMillieum: I do not want to repeat myself again…
Magnus: YESH!!! Yahoooooooooooooooooo. AlusMillieum Guild wahoooo
On the way back to stadium.
Magnus: But I have a question President Alusian.
President from AlusMillieum: yes?
Magnus: Why did you recruit me, I didn’t even posses an element power right?
President from AlusMillieum: No, You have. But it’s not just am ordinary element at your age would possess.
Magnus: What does that mean?
President from AlusMillieum: You possess an ADVANCE ELEMENT!!!
What kind of element can Magnus possess, that make Alusian wanting to recruit Magnus so eagerly and why didn’t Magnus being selected in the first selection round? Find out on the next chapter: Chapter 3: Begin with the Ten days training!
The other 9 guild are entering the stadium orderly ZanMillieum, AlusMillieum, BriMillieum, CaseoMillieum, FretMillieum, KaliMeiilieum, NelimosMillieum, VlikaMillieum and SertagMillieum
Magnus thinking: AlusMillieum is cool… I can see that many other students are aiming for ZanMillieum.
TTL: Magnus what you thinking? Thinking of entering a guild. Not a chance.
Firstly, we are not express student and…..
Justin: Hang on! According to the event, Those student who attend this event may have a chance to be selected by the left and right assistant of each guild.
TCS: But why? I am still confuse, as the principle as announce that only express student can enter this kind of event.
Principle: That’s because you guys are talented…
Magnus, TTL, TCS, Justin: TALENTED???? WE?? HAHAHA
Principle: Ya. I AM SERIOUS.
The four of them were shocked.
Principle: I have seen your record and your exam paper. You guys did badly is because… YOU GUYS ARE LAZY TO FINISH THE EXAM PAPER.
You all only write until where you think, no is confirm that you will get a mere 50 marks. So I recommend your discipline master to let the four of you enter the event.
Magnus: if we are chosen to enter this event for the selection, then WHY THE HELL DID THE DISCIPLINE MASTER MADE US SWEEP THE FLOOR!!!!!
Principle: Hmm for that case, you will have to ask the discipline master yourself. But please get to your seat first according to the number on the entrance card.
The four of them are finding their seats.
Magnus: seat number 890101
TCS: seat number 890102
TTL: seat number 890103
Justin: seat number 890104
On the meantime,
President from BriMillieum: Long time no see, Alusian (president from AlusMillieum) heard that you are not really interested in this kind of event..
President from AlusMillieum: This kind of event doesn’t bring any talented student.
President from FretMillieum walk towards the 2 president.
President from FretMillieum: Nono, There are quite a lot of talented student this time. Unlike the previous guild event, none of us get a decent amount of recruits. I am also quite sure this guild event would be fun too.
President from PlikaMillieum: Off course. This time I will become the top guild rather than third. That old guy (President from ZanMillieum) and you Fretsoe will be defeated by me. (Evil smile)
President from FretMillieum: woot not friendly I guess, hope to get a nice fight from you.
President from AlusMillieum was looking around, he sense one strong element but he couldn’t find where it appear from and from which guy.
President from SertagMillieum: Hey Alusian, This time aren’t you chicken out again, giving up like this isn’t a great man would do… hahahaha
President from AlusMillieum: Excuse me, I need to go to the washroom.
President from SertagMillieum: His attitude again… sighs
President from AlusMillieum followed by his left and right assistant, walked pass Magnus and his gang where they are find their seats. He suddenly stopped. He sense an element came out from Magnus.
President from AlusMillieum: Hey, that guy over there. Whats your name?
Magnus: Me?
President from AlusMillieum: Ya, You.
Magnus: Magnus
President from AlusMillieum: What a weird name. See you later…
Justin: Wow, AlusMillieum president talk to you man.
TTL: There’s our seat.
TCS: WTH!!! Last 4 seats….
Magnus: We are being ill treated. OH NO
Announcer: Ladies and gentlemen, let us start on the selection by the 10 guild assistant.
The guild assistants quickly do their first elimination on those who possess the element power.
After the assistants finish selecting the student…
Announcer: Ok! Those who have a sticker on their shoulder please come forward.
Justin: Woot I have yay I have been selected.
TTL, TCS: Me too. Magnus what about you?
Magnus: I have been eliminated. I didn’t not possess the element power. SO good luck to you guys…
Even though Magnus seems to be happy on the surface but he was crying like hell in his heart.
All the selected students are going onto the stage.
President from NelimosMillieum: Wow, Nice number 360 student have possess the element power. But I think some of them only possess the container for the element power.
Container for the element power means People who are able to have an element power but need a certain period of time like, a month, a year or a lifetime to get it.
President from NelimosMillieum: This is getting more exciting.
Left assistant from NelimosMillieum: Sir, I have detected a strange element power.
President from NelimosMillieum: WHERE!!! Which guy has it?
Left assistant from NelimosMillieum: Sorry sir, I was unable to know who possess it.
President from NelimosMillieum: You fool! Search for it right now…
President from AlusMillieum: There’s no need for a search, That guy, I have recruit him.
President from NelimosMillieum: Oh, Alusian. Didn’t you forget the rule, we have to select the student at the same time.
President from AlusMillieum: Ya I know. But it applies to those who are on the stage right now.
President from NelimosMillieum: Oh I see, so I have no choice but to let you have it. By the way where is that boy that you have recruited?
President from AlusMillieum: Magnus!! Come here right now!
Magnus was shocked and didn’t know what had happen, but to rush over to the president from AlusMillieum.
President from AlusMillieum: This is the guy that I recruited.
President from NelimosMillieum: So is you. When did you find him?
President from AlusMillieum: I am not obligated to let you know. Sorry if you would excuse me, I need to have a word with this boy.
President from NelimosMillieum: Damm Alusian, You are cunning ones.
Alusian bring Magnus outside the stadium.
President from AlusMillieum: Magnus, I have officially recruited you to my guild.
Magnus: WHAT!!!!!
President from AlusMillieum: I do not want to repeat myself again…
Magnus: YESH!!! Yahoooooooooooooooooo. AlusMillieum Guild wahoooo
On the way back to stadium.
Magnus: But I have a question President Alusian.
President from AlusMillieum: yes?
Magnus: Why did you recruit me, I didn’t even posses an element power right?
President from AlusMillieum: No, You have. But it’s not just am ordinary element at your age would possess.
Magnus: What does that mean?
President from AlusMillieum: You possess an ADVANCE ELEMENT!!!
What kind of element can Magnus possess, that make Alusian wanting to recruit Magnus so eagerly and why didn’t Magnus being selected in the first selection round? Find out on the next chapter: Chapter 3: Begin with the Ten days training!
Bio about the story
Element Destiny
Introducing character bio
Main character: Magnus
Age: 13
Race: Chinese
First element achieve: Tian (天) Advance element
Guild: AluMillieum
School: zakura secondary (N(a))
Interest: Play counter-strike, watch television and play chess
About him: He only do what is right for him, Curious about things that he never seen. But he still can’t activate his element power
Classmates: TCS
Age: 13
Race: Chinese (but don’t understand Chinese)
First element achieve: Huo(火)Basic element
Guild: FretMillieum
School: zakura secondary (N(a))
Interest: Betting and play ps2
Number of guild: 10
Dark society: unable to determine…
Fusion technique
Summoning element
Advance element: Tian, Gold, Ground(Di), Demon, Steel
Basic element: Fire, water, Earth(Tu), Lightning and wind
Name of the guild: ZanMillieum, AlusMillieum, BriMillieum, CaseoMillieum, PlikaMillieum, FretMillieum, KaliMeiilieum, NelimosMillieum, VlikaMillieum, SertagMillieum
Current Top 3 guild: ZanMillieum, FretMillieum and PlikaMillieum
Ranking in each guild:
President (who holds the ultimate control in each guild. He/She must obtain 2 summoning creatures and able to fuse them into their soul)
Right assistant and left assistant (support the president in his/her work. Being chief commander with outstanding result and the recommendation of president)
Chief Commander X 10 (spilt into 2 group helping the right and left assistant. Obtain 5 basic element and 3 advance element and able to use summoning creature. Must be recommended by President)
Vice chief Commander (assist the chief commander. Obtain 5 basic element and 3 advance element. Must be recommended by right or left assistant)
Support type, Guard of the guild X 20-30 (Guarding and supporting the guild, act as front line during wartime. Obtain 5 element or 2 advance elements)
1st rate warrior (Top notch warrior, have obtain 3 element and 10 years of fighting experience and passing the 1st rate warrior test or 1 advance element with 2 years of fighting experience)
2nd rate warrior (have obtain 3 element and 10 years of fighting experience and passing the 2nd rate warrior test or 1 advance element and 1 year experience)
3rd rate warrior (obtain 2 element and 5 years of fighting experience or 1 advance element)
1st rate fighter (having 2 element and 2 years of experience)
2nd rate fighter (having 1 element)
3rd rate fighter (having 1 element)
Basic guard (having 1 element but can’t be activated due to insufficient amount of element power)
Purpose of the existing of the guild:
1) Protect the Destiny stone that each guild had been assign with
2) Make sure that people with element won’t go against the justice
3) Gather many possible talent to fight against the dark society
4) Protect the civilians with their own element power.
Introducing character bio
Main character: Magnus
Age: 13
Race: Chinese
First element achieve: Tian (天) Advance element
Guild: AluMillieum
School: zakura secondary (N(a))
Interest: Play counter-strike, watch television and play chess
About him: He only do what is right for him, Curious about things that he never seen. But he still can’t activate his element power
Classmates: TCS
Age: 13
Race: Chinese (but don’t understand Chinese)
First element achieve: Huo(火)Basic element
Guild: FretMillieum
School: zakura secondary (N(a))
Interest: Betting and play ps2
Number of guild: 10
Dark society: unable to determine…
Fusion technique
Summoning element
Advance element: Tian, Gold, Ground(Di), Demon, Steel
Basic element: Fire, water, Earth(Tu), Lightning and wind
Name of the guild: ZanMillieum, AlusMillieum, BriMillieum, CaseoMillieum, PlikaMillieum, FretMillieum, KaliMeiilieum, NelimosMillieum, VlikaMillieum, SertagMillieum
Current Top 3 guild: ZanMillieum, FretMillieum and PlikaMillieum
Ranking in each guild:
President (who holds the ultimate control in each guild. He/She must obtain 2 summoning creatures and able to fuse them into their soul)
Right assistant and left assistant (support the president in his/her work. Being chief commander with outstanding result and the recommendation of president)
Chief Commander X 10 (spilt into 2 group helping the right and left assistant. Obtain 5 basic element and 3 advance element and able to use summoning creature. Must be recommended by President)
Vice chief Commander (assist the chief commander. Obtain 5 basic element and 3 advance element. Must be recommended by right or left assistant)
Support type, Guard of the guild X 20-30 (Guarding and supporting the guild, act as front line during wartime. Obtain 5 element or 2 advance elements)
1st rate warrior (Top notch warrior, have obtain 3 element and 10 years of fighting experience and passing the 1st rate warrior test or 1 advance element with 2 years of fighting experience)
2nd rate warrior (have obtain 3 element and 10 years of fighting experience and passing the 2nd rate warrior test or 1 advance element and 1 year experience)
3rd rate warrior (obtain 2 element and 5 years of fighting experience or 1 advance element)
1st rate fighter (having 2 element and 2 years of experience)
2nd rate fighter (having 1 element)
3rd rate fighter (having 1 element)
Basic guard (having 1 element but can’t be activated due to insufficient amount of element power)
Purpose of the existing of the guild:
1) Protect the Destiny stone that each guild had been assign with
2) Make sure that people with element won’t go against the justice
3) Gather many possible talent to fight against the dark society
4) Protect the civilians with their own element power.
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